This is all I can come up with so far.
For me education isn't just a requirement for the career I will pursue. Education is a passion. I simply love to learn and if I could spend the rest of my life in classroom pursuing some new form of knowledge, I promise you, I would. Obiviously I can't spend my life in a classroom, but I can still work in a research facility and search for those missing links and learning about things that haven't even been discovered yet. All I need is the opportunity.
i think you should also write that it would help you financially.it always show that the scholarship will help you with school.
Ok, so I added this to the end.
All I need is the opportunity to succeed. Unfortunately, every path has it's obstacles, money being mine. If education was a roller coaster ride I wouldn't even have enough to enter the park. By considering me you would be one step closer to giving me that opportunity and I would be one step closer to having it.
I'm not sure if that's good or not. Any other suggestions?
I think you are not talking explicitly on why you need the Scholarship
For me education isn't just a requirement for the career I will pursue. Education is a passion. I simply love to learn and if I could spend the rest of my life in classroom pursuing some new form of knowledge, I promise you, I would. ---talk is cheap. I don't think this part helps.
The way to answer a question about why you should get a scholarship is to explain your detailed action plan for achieving your specific goals. A person with a plan deserves respect and opportunity.
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This would be a good first sentence of the essay, because it is interesting:
Obviously I can't spend my life in a classroom, but I can still work in a research facility and search for those missing links and learning about things that haven't even been discovered yet.
That makes sense.
I had no idea what to write for those questions.
Thank you!
What are you going to school for, what would you like to study? I think adding something in about what you like studying, what fields you enjoy the most, what you plan to do with them, would be beneficial to you.
