Hi every body,
I am writing a personal statement to get a scholarship award. Although I am working but I cannot afford that amount of money to enroll for the program, so I really need that award. Since I submitted an evidence of my employment history, maybe they think that I can afford it. So I want to clarify it by writing this statement that "Although I am working in a company, but I cannot make ends meet on my salary " or "The expenditure is higher than my income". I am going to ask you it sounds appealing if I write them in my personal statement.
Regards,
Goli
I am writing a personal statement to get a scholarship award. Although I am working but I cannot afford that amount of money to enroll for the program, so I really need that award. Since I submitted an evidence of my employment history, maybe they think that I can afford it. So I want to clarify it by writing this statement that "Although I am working in a company, but I cannot make ends meet on my salary " or "The expenditure is higher than my income". I am going to ask you it sounds appealing if I write them in my personal statement.
Regards,
Goli