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Motivation (Agricultural Sciences) - AUSTRALIAN AWARDS 2026 Reintergration plan.



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Mar 17, 2025   #1
Hi everyone, need your feedback on my reintergration plan Q & A below. thanks in advance!

1.Motivation for Applying for an Australia Awards Scholarship and Study Plan (maximum of 250 words)
a.Why are you applying for an Australia Awards Scholarship?
b.Briefly describe your proposed study, including any specialisation you wish to pursue and the skills and knowledge you aim to gain.


I am applying for an Australia Awards Scholarship to pursue a Master of Agricultural Sciences at the University of Melbourne, specializing in Crop and Soil Sciences.
This opportunity will equip me with advanced expertise in sustainable crop production, soil health management, and integrated pest control, which are critical for strengthening Papua New Guinea's (PNG) agricultural resilience and food security-key priorities under the PNG Medium Term Development Plan IV (MTDP IV).

As a Technical Officer in Entomology at the National Agriculture Quarantine and Inspection Authority (NAQIA) with over seven years of experience, I have witnessed the devastating impact of invasive pests, soil degradation, and climate variability on PNG's agricultural sector. My studies will focus on biological pest control, precision agriculture, and soil microbiome health, aligning with MTDP III's goals of increasing agricultural productivity, promoting climate-smart agriculture, and strengthening biosecurity frameworks.

Through this program, I aim to gain expertise in pest risk assessment, molecular diagnostics, and soil fertility management, enabling me to design evidence-based policies, improve PNG's quarantine protocols, and support farmers in adopting climate-resilient farming practices. These efforts directly contribute to MTDP III's priority of ensuring food security and enhancing PNG's capacity to compete in international markets.

Upon completion, I intend to apply my knowledge within NAQIA to enhance pest surveillance systems, develop science-driven biosecurity strategies, and advocate for sustainable agricultural policies. This scholarship is not just a career milestone for me-it is an opportunity to drive impactful change in PNG's agricultural sector, in line with MTDP IV's vision for sustainable economic growth through agriculture.

One essay per thread please.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15593  
Mar 17, 2025   #2
Your essay is over the maximum word count by 4 words. That problem can be easily addressed by simply editing one of the sentences in the essay to shorten it. A simple revision will suffice to help you meet the word count. The reason that you are applying for the scholarship does not mention anything about how your interests and studies align with the program being offered by the university you are interested in attending. The reviewer will become familiar with what you want to study, but not how you plan to pursue those studies at the university. That is something that you should be pointing out in detail within this essay. You are too focused on your country's program explanation that you have forgotten that the program and the curriculum of the university need to align in order to better your chances of being awarded the scholarship.


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