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NOTHING IMPOSSIBLE; Values and Beliefs you hold strongly to; SCHOLARSHIP



Cavinstrivehard 1 / 3  
Jan 6, 2014   #1
"Describe, in less than 300 words, the values and beliefs you hold strongly to. Please provide examples of how you have demonstrated these in your actions."

There is nothing impossible in this world provided one has the necessary willpower and determination to do it. That's right, "Where there is a will, there is a way" is the belief that I hold strongly to and keeps me fighting on until now and forever. When I was young, my results are very poor, but with the influence from my family and friends, I decided to change my lifestyle and strive hard for a better future. With strong will and unshakable determination, I have showed huge improvements. From a boy played around all the time to a man who enjoys reading, learning and thinking, I have become mature and sensible in these years.

I may not be the top student in school but I am not inferior to them when it comes to perseverance. Bill Gates said" I failed in some subjects in exam, but my friend passed in all. Now he is an engineer in Microsoft and I am the owner of Microsoft." His words has inspired me and taught me that failure is the best teacher to success. I don't have any special talent that makes me popular in school but my perseverance and charisma shape me to a lovable person among my friends.

Perhaps I am not the study-type-person as you can refer in my UEC result. But action speaks louder than word, I am more of a hands-on-type person as I always in charge of the science fair in my school and I can handle experiments very well. This is why I choose to be an engineer.

I think luck is what I really need now and I sincerely hope that the scholarship selection committee will give me luck by offering a scholarship and a chance to study in your university. Thank you.

mancho 1 / 1  
Jan 6, 2014   #2
Hi first of all,thank you for your help.Reading your essay I realized I am a ''Microsoft Engineer''.As to my beliefs. My mother once told me , sorry if its not written quite in good English,"Never do anything with your hands,that can be done by your mind''. So since than I am working hard to reach the "Top"level in my career as a Neuroscientist.
OP Cavinstrivehard 1 / 3  
Jan 9, 2014   #3
Hey, Thanks for your help Mancho. What I mean by "hand-on-type" is to emphasize on the idea that I love to create or invent things ( of course I need to use my mind to innovate stuff). ya that's what engineers do and I don't want you to get the wrong idea of me haha. Thanks again^^
speedster 2 / 10  
Jan 19, 2014   #4
From a boy who played around all the time to a man who enjoys reading, learning and thinking, I have become mature and sensible in these years.

His words hashave inspired me and taught me that failure is the best teacher to success.

I think luck is what I really need now and I sincerely hope that the scholarship selection committee will give me luck by offering a scholarship and a chance to study in your university. Thank you.

You might want to end this differently. Scholarships are not given to the lucky ones but to those who deserve them. End with a convincing statement that makes you a deserving candidate for the scholarship
Guti - / 1  
Jan 29, 2014   #5
Awesome Essay Man....but in my personally angle u should add more reasons and give some relevant example why u choose to be an engineer...otherwise it's adorable....Good job....


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