Partial scholarships essay help for master degree in marketing

Hello, I'm a new member in this forum. I've been searching a reference for my essay, and I found out that this forum is really interesting and very resourceful. I am so glad that I could join this forum anw I have been working on my scholarships essay for a partial scholarships, but I haven't started yet because before I'm starting to write I want to have a perfect foundation or theme to build up upon. Here are the question:

i need to write 800 to 1000 word based on this question:

1 Why u r applying 4 Brunel's schol programme
2 How u will benefit from the opportunities that being given the award will provide
3 How u would contribute to the Brunel community during your studies here.

they said that the reference can be made to activities, achievements and personal qualities which are considered particularly relevant to the scholarships application.

I already write and send my personal statement and it already contain some of my achievement, activities and personal qualities...
the question is:
1. are they going to look over my PS and can I/ should I rephrase them (PS) in my essay?
2. I still don't understand on the question number 3? is brunel community is the people inside or outside (around) campus? and how should I going to do with this question?

3. Because this is a partial scholarships is there any particular idea or theme should i build upon..and if there a sample it really helpful..

and the last....
4. How can I start to write??

I am so frustrated, a little hint and helpful suggestion would really help,.thank u for the answer..

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These three can be answered in 3 different paragraphs, but you can unite them with a common theme: Your clearly envisioned, detailed plan.

What is the essay about? Your plan to master this field and contribute to the school.
What are the paragraphs about? para #1 is intro, para #2 is about Why you are applying, para #3 is about how you will benefit, para #4 is about how you will make the school a better place (i.e. contribute), and para #5 is the conclusion, and it is about these 3 things, which make up plan for the future.

should I rephrase them (PS) in my essay?
No, with this essay focus on sharing your plan for the future.

I still don't understand on the question number 3? is brunel community is the people inside or outside (around) campus? and how should I going to do with this question?

Yes, the community is comprised of the people. How can you contribute? That depends on your special interests. If you have passion for marketing, I expect that you will want to be involved with student organizations that market products and services; I expect that you will join in clubs full of other business and marketing students. You can contribute whatever you are good at, whatever you are inspired to do.

If you have passion for learning, especially your chosen field, you will be contributing to the learning community.

I have been working on my scholarships essay for a partial scholarships
[A good place to start is to spend a quality amount of time researching the philisophy and allegiances associated with your particular scholarship program. Approving commitees are usually looking for content. You want to clearly articulate an understanding of the programs overall philosophy for its existence i.e., the principles it was founded; the types of opportunities (beyond the obvious- finanial) the founders envisioned; and the specific ways the approving committee envisions awardees contributing in kind. Your essay will then combine those facts with your PS in such a way that clearly demonstrates your alignment with the organization, committe, program, and scholarship foundation.

Reword the three questions below to narrow down a search on the program to get started. I gave an example for each. But, there are many ways you may want to reword them to suit your specifics. Good luck. Hope that's some help to you.

1 Why u r applying 4 Brunel's schol programme What do you know about this program- that disquishes it from others?
2 How u will benefit from the opportunities that being given the award will provide This award provides you more that just financial benefit. It provides other opportunities that are mutually beneficial. What might be some mutually beneficial opportunities?

3 How u would contribute to the Brunel community during your studies here.What specific causes/initiatives have historically been of interest for the program, scholarhip fund, etc? What are they currently? Is there a commom principle? If so, do you share it?

Thank you very much for the advice...hopefully I could start to write something, as soon as I get the first draft I will post it on the thread...best luck!