Discovery consists of seeing
The reviewer is not interested in the opinion, observations, and views of non applicants. Do not highlight other established people's names in the presentation. Open with your opinion instead. That is what matters to and is considered by the reviewer.
One of the memories in my early 20s
This shows an early influence in your career choice but does not show a profession related experience based on your personal exposure. Being a masters student entails work exposure targets in relation to career growth. Replace the reference.
made me to carry out a professional project
When? What were the results? Have your findings been published and adopted in the medical AI and robotics field in your country ?
I have worked with artificial intelligence for three years
There is no reference to this in the statement as a primary purpose driver with a specific learning target in relation to specific field problems you hope to address.
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