I will have to get straight A's; Long and short term goals!

A goal can be described as my ambition. What is it that I truly want to achieve in my life? Ever since I learned how to talk, I have learned about responsibilities; all the responsibilities I have had have lead me to the right path towards my goals. For my short-term, it is something I want in the near future. I can obtain in twelve or less months. The first short-term I have in mind it is to graduate high school as an honor student. Even though I have worked on it all my four years of high school, these last two semesters will be either I accomplish this goal or not. By this means, I will have to get straight A's this semester just like I did the first one. Another short-term I want, it is to attain is to get a part time job to help my parents with the tuition to college. I will also spend some of the money I get from my job, to help a kid in Africa by paying monthly for their necessities. I also want to start volunteering in hospitals; one of my dearest dreams has been to read stories to the ill patients. Another short term goal is to help out my community with recycling. I want to start a club, so that we can go around parks picking up any trash there is around. Additionally, I want to get to a weight that I am comfortable enough with; I will go to the gym and exercise and even eat healthier in order to have a healthier way of living. I am trying my hardest to be determined enough to reach these goals, and hopefully in a year I will be able to look back and be proud of myself for what I have completed. However, when it comes to long terms, I will need a little more time in a year for me to reach my dreams. My first long term that it is my main priority it is to graduate college with a bachelor's degree in speech pathologist. Also I want to travel the world after college; the main places I want to go are Australia, South America, and Asia. I wish to gain knowledge of more about each different cultures, peculiarities, and traditions. Also, I want to save money, and go on Mission Trips to Nicaragua. I have always wanted to help construct water tubes, so that the people in the village can acquire water. Last but not least, my long-term goal is to raise a family. I want to be able to have explored the world and my youth, but I cannot wait to start my own life with my significant other. I know these goals are challenging, but if I manage to stick through my plans and have a time management I will hopefully achieve all of these targets. In a way I see all of them related because they are part of my happiness. These are goals I want to have to lead me to success.

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I just wanted to see if there was anything I should change or that I should add anything

These sound more less like definitions. The admission panel would not be interested know such theory or general knowledge. They would want to know about you as a person. They want to understand what your goals are, both short and long term. I feel you should not waste words on telling them things that you already know. Such lines may not contribute anything meaningful to your response.

I will join a gym and start eating healthier foods for a better way of living.


I want to enjoy my youth and explore the world to the fullest


You are talking about almost the whole continents, try to be more specific for the "MAIN PLACES"


Another short term goal that I want is to get a part time job to help my parents with the "college fees" ( I assume that by *tuition* u meant fees because at my place it is used like this,Write the original words if im wrong ;) :) )


I would appreciate if you will take a look at my essay too :)

I think that you have some problems with structure in sentences. You should be a bit formal. But I also have the same problem.