supporting statement : Australia Award Scholarship

How did you choose your proposed course and institution? (max 400 words)

Working for the house of Regional Representative Council as a special staff has encouraged myself to pursue my degree in the fields of governance and public policy. This is because a higher qualification is urgently required in the institution in which I work for. I utterly believe that by taking a master degree can help me to perfect my career in a governmental institution and engage myself in policy making more frequently inasmuch as my status will be an expert staff when I get master degree.

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How did you choose your proposed course and institution? (max 400 words)

Working for the house of Regional Representative Council as a special staff has encouraged myself me to pursue my degree in the fields of governance and public policy. This is because a higher qualification is urgently required in the institution in which I work for. I utterly believe that by taking a master degree can help me to perfect my career in a governmental institution and engage myself in policy making (more frequently inasmuch as my status will be an expert staff - REPHRASE when I get master degree.)

Moreover, as a part time lecturer who teaches comparison of foreign policy, public policy analysis and globalization at Universitas Nasional Jakarta, I firmly believe that I need to continue my study to a post-graduate program so as to support my career (as an academicianin the academy ) For this reason, I have decided that (I intend for taking- I WILL TAKE MY) master degree in the field of governance and public policy. The studies apply a social science perspective to questions of policy and management in modern organizations especially when it comes to Indonesian conditionculture . Therefore, I will acquire a solid grounding in policy analysis to support myself as a practitioner and academician in governmental issues

Furthermore, I have chosen UNSW because it is one of the most prestigious universities in Australia and ranked as 50 top universities in the world. Likewise, International networking and the best rating in research and teaching environment have also been considered by me(YOU DON'T CONSIDER THE UNIVERSITY MASTER DEGREE, YOU APPLY FOR IT AND THEY CHOOSE YOU) why I love the university to pursue my degree. The university is also a founding member of the prestigious Group of Eight (Go8). The second is Murdoch University which is located in the economically booming state of Western Australia. The university has a good reputation globally and it is provedproven by online discussions and online assignments that Murdoch University has. Hence, I firmly believe that the university will help me to gaining knowledge which I need. Both of the universities also have specific subject course modules which are perfectly suitable for Indonesian condition in this day and age such as Democracy in the 21st Century, International security and Strategy, and Economic of Globalization.

The aforementionedREPHRASEThe above mentioned shows that my career and the quality of educational institutions have been considered by myself to study for master degree in the field of public policy and governance in Australia. The modules which are thought at the university are my deep contemplation of choosing the institutions as well.

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