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PROMPT: Describe, in less than 300 words, the values and beliefs you hold strongly to. Please provide examples of how you have demonstrated these in your actions.
I am a student on SMAN3SMG. SMAN3SMG is the one of best school on thus country. Many teenager want to apply on my school. And i can be the one of lucky girl at this time. But the truth i'm not. I did many way to apply SMAN3SMG. Before i just a countrified girl. My junior high school is near of my house and isn't too much favorite. I get information of SMAN 3 SMG from my sister. She is one of student there. Im joining many course. Although the place of course so far and i don't know what the transportation i wanna take, i always try to be on time. Before i study in SMAN 3 SMG, i just a dreamer. Just a dream that i have catch and effort now. I always dream can do something for worth the world. I'm a optimist person and I'm idealist too, sometimes i force my self to get what i want. If i'm fail, I'm never give up. I think that its whip me to try again and push my limit, for the example when i join cheerleading(GGCTHUNDERS), i frequently fell down and many people despise our team that we wont win because of me, but i also believe with my skill. I can contribute achivevement for my school. I'm a honest person but i'm so stubborn, but since i join scientific discussion forum team(FDI) i open minded about another opinion and learn about public speaking. When i was childern, my parents always teach me to say thankfull and say sorry. My parents also say that winner is dreamer. Since in mid senior high school, i dream i can school in NTU. I believe and will prove that i can explore my self although in foreign country.
PROMPT: Describe, in less than 300 words, the values and beliefs you hold strongly to. Please provide examples of how you have demonstrated these in your actions.
I am a student on SMAN3SMG. SMAN3SMG is the one of best school on thus country. Many teenager want to apply on my school. And i can be the one of lucky girl at this time. But the truth i'm not. I did many way to apply SMAN3SMG. Before i just a countrified girl. My junior high school is near of my house and isn't too much favorite. I get information of SMAN 3 SMG from my sister. She is one of student there. Im joining many course. Although the place of course so far and i don't know what the transportation i wanna take, i always try to be on time. Before i study in SMAN 3 SMG, i just a dreamer. Just a dream that i have catch and effort now. I always dream can do something for worth the world. I'm a optimist person and I'm idealist too, sometimes i force my self to get what i want. If i'm fail, I'm never give up. I think that its whip me to try again and push my limit, for the example when i join cheerleading(GGCTHUNDERS), i frequently fell down and many people despise our team that we wont win because of me, but i also believe with my skill. I can contribute achivevement for my school. I'm a honest person but i'm so stubborn, but since i join scientific discussion forum team(FDI) i open minded about another opinion and learn about public speaking. When i was childern, my parents always teach me to say thankfull and say sorry. My parents also say that winner is dreamer. Since in mid senior high school, i dream i can school in NTU. I believe and will prove that i can explore my self although in foreign country.
