Please review for content / errors and comment on my essay for Undergraduate Admission to FAMU... THANKS!! Any help is greatly appreciated!
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Essay Prompt:
Describe an activity, interest, experience, or achievement in your life (250 words or less)
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Taking a chance can change your future. In February 2010, I got my first job at the local "Red Elephant Pizza & Grill", one that I still have to this day. I applied for the job at the age of 16, not expecting to be hired. After I got a call back right away, and a successful interview, I was offered my first job. This job experience has been particularly meaningful in my life and has truly helped me learn and grow. I have made the most of my time there since, working to make my way up the corporate ladder.
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Essay Prompt:
Describe an activity, interest, experience, or achievement in your life (250 words or less)
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Taking a chance can change your future. In February 2010, I got my first job at the local "Red Elephant Pizza & Grill", one that I still have to this day. I applied for the job at the age of 16, not expecting to be hired. After I got a call back right away, and a successful interview, I was offered my first job. This job experience has been particularly meaningful in my life and has truly helped me learn and grow. I have made the most of my time there since, working to make my way up the corporate ladder.
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