Want to advance my knowledge; Motivation letter - Computer sciences faculty in Norway

In my country motivation letters are not requested, it is my first essay and since very much depends on it. so I will be thankful for your suggestions...

Nowadays computer sciences are developing very fast, despite of this I am convinced in my skills, because I am quite hardworking person and since my childhood I have had a goal to best in whatever I do.

To begin with, for this moment I am a student of xxxxxxx, studying at Exact and Natural Sciences department. Since I remember myself I have been very interesting in Natural Sciences. At school I was keen of math and was very good at it, I have to admit that I have a golden medal because I graduated school as excellent student. I got high scores in the National Exams, so I became a student of State University. I am proud of it , because xxxxxx has a long history and many graduated are worldwide famous scientists.

During four years studying at university, I obtained a broad and solid base in networking and programming fields through textbook knowledge and practical training. In the first year of my bachelor's degree I was learning programing language C and algorithms. I found it very interesting and fascinating. I used to work about solving problems with great passion and interest. I was so Interested in computer science that since I have not stopped doing it. Programming languages opened a new world for me. Because of it I enrolled for the next semesters C++, Java, Operating systems and so on. Especially I was so keen on Java that I did lots of extra work , used to read articles and search for good code examples in internet . As I already told you I am good at math, so I found it easy to write good and clear code and algorithm. Right now I am working part time job on .Net programming . For this moment I have a solid university background in computer science .

I wish to take deeper specialization that gives high competence and research experience so when I heard about exchange program I was very interested in it. Studying at xxxxx university and accessing first-rate facility will provide me with essential knowledge and research skills to achieve my goal. Moreover, living in Norway and experiencing a European environment will be a precious opportunity for me to develop both socially and technically. Therefore, I consider your master program a vital step towards my career success. I would like to have deeper knowledge to be confidence about my future career, so enrolling in xxxx university will be a great chance for me.

Sincerely your xxxxx

Revise it! Give it to a English teacher or someone native because there are a lot of mistakes.

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Motivation letter

The reason for this letter of motivation is to convince you of my ability and my wish to study at the Ostford University.

Nowadays computer sciences are developing very fast, despite of this I am convinced in my skills, because I am quite hardworking person and since my childhood I have had a goal to be good in whatever I do.

To begin with, for this moment I am a student of Ivane Javakhishvili Tbilisi State University , studying at the faculty of Exact and Natural Sciences. Since I remember myself, I have been very interested in Natural Sciences. At school I was keen on math and was very good at it, also I have a golden medal, because I graduated school as an excellent student. I got high scores in the National Exams, so I became a student of State University and because of high scores I got Government grant.

In the first year of my bachelor's degree I was learning programing language C and algorithms. I found it very interesting and fascinating. I used to work about solving problems with great passion and interest. Programming languages opened a new world for me. So I go on studying C++, Java, Operating systems and so on. I was so keen on High Level Programming languages, specially java , that I did lots of extra work , used to read articles and search for good code examples on the internet . Moreover, I found out that I was more interested in applied mathematics than in theoretical one. So I took four subjects from Numerical Analysis block. First we used to learn theory and analyze for example approximation of method, then we wrote program using some programing languages, or sometimes used MATLAB. As I already told you, I am good at math, so I found it easy to write good and clear code and algorithm. I enjoyed the way we used to analyze problems and solve them programmatically. Right now I am working part time on .Net programming. For this moment I have a solid university background in computer science and I wish to take deeper specialization that gives high competence and research experience.

When I first heard about exchange program, I was very interested in it. Studying at Ostford university and accessing first-rate facilities will provide me with essential knowledge and research skills to achieve my goal. Moreover, living in Norway and experiencing European environment will be precious opportunity for me, as I have been interested in Scandinavian culture since I first read Scandinavian mythology. It was at the age of ten and from that moment I am looking forward to looking through many new things about it. Therefore, I consider your master program a vital step towards my career success. In the way to develop both socially and technically.

I am socially active person. I took part in the student protest against torment facts in prison. Also I often take part in public lectures, where students and lecturers discuss about education reform.

Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to your acceptance.

Sincerely yours xxxxxx

... I suggest you to remove this line. I feel this does not give a good opening to your letter of motivation. :(
It's better to talk about your skills and abilities specifically rather than just making a general statement.

Here's a link for a sample motivation letter. Perhaps it may provide you with a useful guideline.