Hi,
the expression of delight that followed the curing of a devastating influenza after a visit to a doctor
and that dreamThis last three words sound weird.They possessed masculine features but had wings.
They possessed masculine features
and had wings. Why use but?
sun's light
sunlight?
I stretched my arms and let out a large yawn; jumped out of bed, no stuffy nose and weak limbs holding me back, ran to my parents, ecstatically, and told them about my dream.
";" wrongly used. I think this is a run-on sentence.
brings joy to a person's life
I think people will be better.
Besides your dream, I don't really know why you want to study medicine. Try elaborating your academic interest. Good luck.