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Hello. My name is Ju Young and I'm currently studying in Canada.
I was wondering if this would be okay for one of my short answers to MIT...

Biology has always been one of my greatest interests. During the first semester of my senior year, I took a co-operative program as an option with my biology teacher as a teacher/lab assistant. Here, I had hands-on experience in laboratories as I learned how to identify different macromolecules in food and learned how to use electrophoresis analysis to detect DNA matches between long lost family members (with donated samples). I also completed my full biology courses during my junior year, which allowed me to take this co-op program to expand my passion in biology through research and experimentations.

Thank you ^^

Biology has always been one of my greatest interests. During the first semester of my senior year, I took an optional co-operative program as an option with my biology teacher as a teacher/lab assistant. Here, I gainedhad hands-on experience in laboratories as I learned how to identify different macromolecules in food and learned how to use electrophoresis analysis to detect DNA matches between long lost family members (with donated samples). I also completed my full biology courses during my junior year, which allowed me to take this co-op program to expand my passion in biology through research and experimentations.

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Thank you so much! :)