i am a international students, so please help me with my essay, about the grammer and expressing , i am not good at express by writing .
As an international student stayed at Ohio for three years, the Ohio had been my second hometown. The Ohio State University is my best choice for transfer and continue my studying. Because it can offer me a better education opportunity, and let me stay at Ohio where l loved. As the academic considering, the Ohio state university is outstanding in the business education area. Fisher College of Business is the best business college in the United States. It became the aim when I came to United States. During the campus vising, I got form my friend that the challenge and competition are huge and heavy in the OSU, because the grades and performance depends which student could be enter the fish college. It also will be the challenge to me. I like challenging, that always the shortcut to strength people. After compare the Curriculum between the OSU and UD, I found the similar curriculum would minimalize the difficult for me to study at OSU. The Ohio State University is a huge school, which offers many programs and student organizations. I have been to OSU for watching the NCCA basketball game and football game. Have been in the Lady Gaga's Concert at OSU. These chances made me crazy and loved the events in OSU. Especially in the NCCA Basketball game, with the passion affected by OSU students, I was addicted to the game and want to be one of them. I come to OSU twice a moth, the safety and quite campus, the good learning environment, and sufficiency in living made me chose the Ohio State University, I trust I can have a unforgettable studying life in OSU.
thanks
As an international student stayed at Ohio for three years, the Ohio had been my second hometown. The Ohio State University is my best choice for transfer and continue my studying. Because it can offer me a better education opportunity, and let me stay at Ohio where l loved. As the academic considering, the Ohio state university is outstanding in the business education area. Fisher College of Business is the best business college in the United States. It became the aim when I came to United States. During the campus vising, I got form my friend that the challenge and competition are huge and heavy in the OSU, because the grades and performance depends which student could be enter the fish college. It also will be the challenge to me. I like challenging, that always the shortcut to strength people. After compare the Curriculum between the OSU and UD, I found the similar curriculum would minimalize the difficult for me to study at OSU. The Ohio State University is a huge school, which offers many programs and student organizations. I have been to OSU for watching the NCCA basketball game and football game. Have been in the Lady Gaga's Concert at OSU. These chances made me crazy and loved the events in OSU. Especially in the NCCA Basketball game, with the passion affected by OSU students, I was addicted to the game and want to be one of them. I come to OSU twice a moth, the safety and quite campus, the good learning environment, and sufficiency in living made me chose the Ohio State University, I trust I can have a unforgettable studying life in OSU.
thanks
