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Personal background; Tell us the most important things about you and your life



thundergirl2014 2 / 3  
Dec 7, 2013   #1
Directions:Tell us the most important things about you and your life. You may include significant events, personal strengths and weaknesses, etc.(1-3 paragraphs)

This is what I have so far:One of my many strengths is that I always try to find the good in every situation. my parents have always told me that "don't complain about your life because their is somebody out there with a worse problem than what you are dealing with right now."

One of my personal strengths is that I have the ability to stand in front of crowds and sing or present a project without missing a beat. The school I go to is a new tech school. Thats means that we work on projects and then we present are best work to the class. We have done this now for almost four or five years now. This has worked to my advantage because most kids my age are not really prepared for a speech presentation or if they are they get up in front of the class and freeze mid-presentation.

I am also trying to find something else about me to put in a last paragraph.

Pahan 1 / 1824  
Dec 7, 2013   #2
myMy parents have always told me that "don't complain about your life because theirthere is somebody out there with a worse problem than what you are dealing with right now

I feel you should be more creative with the presentation of this response. You don't have to say these are my strengths, but you can let the reader to understand it. For example, instead of syaing;

One of my many strengths is that I always try to find the good in every situation.

you can say;
I try to find the good in every situation. .... then elaborate on that and the reader would definitely find that it is one of your strengths.


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