I believe Georgia Tech is a prestigious university for its innovative education learning styles

Even though Georgia Tech is well known for its strong engineering program, I believe Georgia Tech is a prestigious university for its innovative education learning styles. I look forward to attending Georgia Tech because it gives me the opportunity to go beyond classroom lectures and gain an advantage in the real world through its Cooperative education programs. Personally, I believe a student cannot learn unless they apply the concepts which they learn. This program gives me the opportunity to gain practical work experience and stand out to employers. In addition, with Georgia Tech's "Problem based learning" and "flipped classroom," gives me a different experience as a solely unique university where I can flourish to my full potential while at the same time allowing me to freely engage in the diverse student body seen on my college tour. Thus, I strongly believe I can excel at Georgia Tech.

1. In addition, with Georgia Tech's (...) "flipped classroom," gives me (...) my full potential, while at the same ...

2. "Personally, I believe a student cannot ..." this sentence is written a bit awkwardly

Ayush, what is the prompt that you are responding to and how many words or characters are allowed? The response that you gave doesn't illustrate a specific prompt response as your essay is making generalized references to Georgia Tech. You need to focus on a specific program, in relation to your major and then craft an accurate response. The statement that you provided tells me that you are limited in the length of your response. However, the limit on the response should not result in seemingly non-answers that do not make any solid reference to your chosen major, the training it requires, and why Georgia Tech was the university that you settled on.

The reason that I cannot offer you a more solid response and review of your work is simple, you did not give me the instructions or a copy of the prompt that you are responding to. Hence, I am unable to review your essay for responsiveness and clarity. Sadly, I cannot give you a second review even if you supplied me with the prompt now. So you just wasted your chance to get a proper assessment for your essay. Please remember to post the prompt along with the response next time.

Oh my bad, here is the prompt:

Beyond rankings, location, and athletics, why are you interested in attending Georgia Tech? (150 Words)