Hi! I am applying for international relations. Thanks in advance for any feedback!
PROMPT: Tell us why you have chosen the above campus (using a maximum of 700 characters-spaces and punctuation included).
RESPONSE: Big cities have always excited me. At first, I thought that just like a big city, NYU was filled with diverse, academically successful individuals. After a while, it occurred to me: NYU is New York City. It becomes its own haven for students, and the possibilities to grow and learn are endless. NYU is in the center of the largest city on the planet, and has continued to be a hub for communication for the entire world. Because of the diversity and its consolidation of the world, NYU is the premier school to study International Relations. The opportunities NYU has to offer are endless, and can help me grow into a successful adult with the knowledge that I can gain from my experience.
PROMPT: Tell us why you have chosen the above campus (using a maximum of 700 characters-spaces and punctuation included).
RESPONSE: Big cities have always excited me. At first, I thought that just like a big city, NYU was filled with diverse, academically successful individuals. After a while, it occurred to me: NYU is New York City. It becomes its own haven for students, and the possibilities to grow and learn are endless. NYU is in the center of the largest city on the planet, and has continued to be a hub for communication for the entire world. Because of the diversity and its consolidation of the world, NYU is the premier school to study International Relations. The opportunities NYU has to offer are endless, and can help me grow into a successful adult with the knowledge that I can gain from my experience.