'a biology related major' - Commonapp- school of choice short answer

With the understanding that the choice of academic school you indicated is not binding, explain why you are applying to that particular school of study.

I am applying to the Wiess School of Natural Sciences in order to pursue a biology related major. I have been interested in biology all my life, as I have always gravitated towards the life and health aspect of science. During my junior year of high school, I enrolled in advanced biology, chemistry, and physics courses concurrently, in order to find out my true passion. I confirmed my inclination towards biology, as I realized that I loved the mechanics of the living world. To me, biology is by far the most important type of science, as it is the most directly related to our wellbeing. I believe that biology holds the most secrets of the world, and that advancements and discoveries in biology can be applied to many other things. Biology is an extremely versatile subject and is applicable in many fields, creating flexibility in a future career path.

I want to learn about biology so that I may help others, which is why I want to become a doctor, and therefore plan on going to medical school after my undergraduate studies. I have wanted to become a doctor from a very young age, when adults would ask what I wanted to be when I grew up; the answer was always doctor, because I regarded doctors as heroes who saved lives. Since then, I have always been passionate about helping others, and I wish to be able to help others in a much more significant manner. The summer before my senior year, I decided to volunteer at a hospital and gain a first hand experience of what I believe to be my future. My volunteering experience made me realize that I wanted to help others, and I believe that studying at the Wiess School of Natural Sciences will help me achieve that goal.

any help would be appreciated, thanks!

I am applying to the Wiess School of Natural Sciences in order to pursue a biology related major. I have been interested in biology all my life, as I have always gravitated towards the life and health aspect of science. During my junior year of high school, I enrolled in advanced biology, chemistry, and physics courses concurrently, in order to find out my true passion. When I completed these course, I realized that I loved the mechanics of the living world, thus confirming my inclination towards biology. To me, biology is by far the most important type of science, as it is the most directly related to our wellbeing. I believe that biology holds the most secrets of the world, and that advancements and discoveries in biology can be applied to many other things. Biology is an extremely versatile subject and is applicable in many fields, creating flexibility in a future career path.

I want to learn about biology so that I may help others, which is why I want to become a doctor.Therefore, I plan on going to medical school after my undergraduate studies. I have always wanted to become a doctor. As a little child, when asked what I wanted to be when I grew up, the answer was always " a doctor" , because I regarded doctors as heroes who saved lives. Since then, I have always been passionate about helping others, and I wish to be able to help others in a much more significant manner. The summer before my senior year, I decided to volunteer at a hospital and gain a first hand experience of what I believe to be my future. My volunteering experience made me realize that I wanted to help others, and I believe that studying at the Wiess School of Natural Sciences will help me achieve that goal.

This is really good! I like how you not only explained why but also went back in time. However, was there a specific experience you had that motivated you to want to become a doctor? A certain encounter with biology?