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And the boy loved the tree?/ Character in a fiction



christiek 6 / 57  
Sep 1, 2009   #1
4) And the tree was happy. How sad, I used to think. I flipped back through the worn out pages, and noticed the faded black ink and the cranberry juice stain on page fifteen where there was a big white space next to the illustration of the tree. The Giving Tree, by Shel Silverstein has been a short story I have been reading since I was in the third grade. I have grown up with this book, and every time I read it, as I grew older, there were things I didn't understand. I felt ambivalent towards the boy and the tree each time I opened the lime colored book. Sympathizing for the tree, but admiring it. And disappointment towards the boy, but understanding him. It just seemed natural for a while. However, I gained a new perspective of each character at the end that felt right. Moreover, the tree influenced me.

The little boy in the story starts as an innocent character. His desires are simple, but he had many. My innocence and child-likeness was paralleled with the little boy as a child. There are always many requests little kids can have. The first thought I had about the book was, "I wish I had a tree like that." If I had a giving tree, it would have given me everything it had: apples, shade, branches, leaves and even its stump to sit on.

But as time went on and I turned to the book again, a new thought came about the boy. A basic outline of his whole life was organized in one place, and it was easy for me to analyze aspects of his life. The second perspective came into my head, "the boy is selfish." It seemed like the boy only turned to the tree when he needed something and not just because he loves the tree for being the tree. I was annoyed with the little boy. It was interesting because throughout the book, even as the little boy grew older he was still referred to as the boy. He was not the teenager, young adult, grown-up or old man. The tree lived in its own timeless world while the boy grew older and older. There is a danger of narrow-mindedness the boy had. He remained needy as the years passed and there seemed to never be enough of something. But I concluded that I didn't like him.

More time passed, where I was in high school and probably to the time the boy had a girlfriend. And when I read it, a third perspective came in mind, "I want to grow up to be like the giving tree." The tree is a self-less character that is exceptionally patient and gives unconditional love. Unable to move from its lonesome spot, the tree succumbs to people who come to it. It is unable to move. I felt bad for the tree, but I was still attracted to it. I was influenced to become a more compassionate person. While listening to Barack Obama speak while he was still a candidate, he stated, "... we should talk more about our empathy deficit... when you choose to broaden your ambit of concern and empathize with the plight of others...it becomes harder not to act; harder not to help." His statement about the country's empathy deficit, made me think about The Giving Tree. The quote opened my mind; I realized the dangers of being narrow-minded like the boy. The tree became my model.

Notoman 20 / 414  
Sep 1, 2009   #2
Don't feel that I am beating on you with what I am about to say. I am not saying that you are wrong, but let me tell you how your essay could be received by others ...

My first thought when I read this essay is that you still have a lot of growing to do. It is good that you don't want to be the boy anymore, but the desire to emulate the tree isn't exactly healthy either. Altruism may be taught in many schools as the ideal human state of mind, but selflessness leaves a person, well, without a self. The human condition, when fully realized (self-actualization, if you want to call it that), would require give and take, mutually-beneficial relationships, and personal boundaries. The tree is a doormat. She enables the boy's poor behavior, is not just selfless but self-sacrificing, and in my book (not in a literal sense as I have never written a book for children) is not someone to emulate. The Giving Tree is more of a cautionary tale than anything else. It is a tragedy--for the boy as well as the tree.

Knowing a little bit about Shel Silverstein, I doubt if this was the message he wanted readers to take away from his book. Silverstein had a wry view of things. Ever heard the Johnny Cash song, "25 Minutes to Go"? It is about a man on death row and his last 25 minutes of life (Silverstein was an accomplished musician and won a Grammy for "A Boy Named Sue"--he wrote many songs that became hits). Silverstein was a complex man. He was known for his bawdy songs and life as a playboy--in fact, he wrote for Playboy.

As sunny as your essay is, I feel that there are risks involved with using it with a college application. The odds of having a highly-educated woman who thinks that The Giving Tree preaches that women should be self-sacrificing and subservient to the men in their lives and presents a negative message to the little girls of the world are pretty high. The admission personnel are more likely to see you as young and naive (in part because you chose a character from kiddie lit) as they are to see you as the next Barack Obama. Which brings me to another point: you spend an awful lot of space is an essay about you talking about Barack Obama. You need to be careful in an essay of this length to stick to the topic without introducing tangents.
Llamapoop123 7 / 433  
Sep 1, 2009   #3
As sunny as your essay is, I feel that there are risks involved with using it with a college application.

^This is completely true.

When I first read it (granted that I am not as observant as Noto here) I thought that it was very very interesting and engaging. Perhaps your introduction was not the best thing but the rest of your essay was quite thought provoking. Perhaps it is this thought provoking aspect that brings down your essay as Noto here has demonstrated.

I suggest that you switch the topic (although I liked this story) because comparing yourself to a tree is unwise. A tree has no ambition and its patience far exceeds that of a healthy human being. Giving unconditionally does not create a mutual relationship between you and your friends. What ends up happening is that you will remain resolute and unmoving in life while your associates all move on.
EF_Simone 2 / 1975  
Sep 1, 2009   #4
Hmmm... I can't read this essay without thinking about my own analysis of that story, which is that nature is presented as existing for the use of people, the tree as the all-giving mother, the boy's heedless use of the tree as perfectly natural, and the reduction of the tree to a stump acceptable rather than tragic. That being the case, I too question your wish to emulate the tree, to be so selflessly giving that you will let people use you up and then thank them for it.
OP christiek 6 / 57  
Sep 1, 2009   #5
Is there a way to work with what I've got, or make a completely new one?

-thank you for all this, i seriously was blind to all of the possible ways people will perceive the essay. it was really interesting reading all your comments :)
Llamapoop123 7 / 433  
Sep 1, 2009   #6
Is there a way to work with what I've got, or make a completely new one?

I would switch topics. It appears that this essay expresses your view on this book for many years so changing it up would require a certain amount of lying.
OP christiek 6 / 57  
Sep 1, 2009   #7
okay, well i did have a brainstorm about the little prince. haha
i love that book too. it's not considered a child's book right?

orrr,
i thought a brainstorm about mersault from the stranger.
i mean i can write about a negative-ish influence and disagree with mersault right? the influence doesnt need to be positive

for some reason i feel so confused..

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