Hello, I'm an international student applying to schools in the US and I'm feeling insecure about my writting. I would appreciate any help!
My favorite thing about my school in Brazil was pobably the annual beneficient school games. The chance to get involved in activities, work in a team and get to know new people was always really exciting for me. It takes a lot of time and hard work to put 32 tasks together, and since school didn't stop, my grades went down a lot during the games. In 2011 I had the chance to lead one of the 3 teams and it was really complicated, however it's amazing to see the final results. My team and I managed to get 150 sponsors and collect 10 tons of food and clothing for charity. It's incredible to hear your team's name as the winner, but in the end, the opportunity to help people in my community was the best part of the experience. As the winners, we had the chance to go to each institution and deliver the 24 tons of food and cloting that the school collected, and to see so many people happy and smiling was priceless.
My favorite thing about my school in Brazil was pobably the annual beneficient school games. The chance to get involved in activities, work in a team and get to know new people was always really exciting for me. It takes a lot of time and hard work to put 32 tasks together, and since school didn't stop, my grades went down a lot during the games. In 2011 I had the chance to lead one of the 3 teams and it was really complicated, however it's amazing to see the final results. My team and I managed to get 150 sponsors and collect 10 tons of food and clothing for charity. It's incredible to hear your team's name as the winner, but in the end, the opportunity to help people in my community was the best part of the experience. As the winners, we had the chance to go to each institution and deliver the 24 tons of food and cloting that the school collected, and to see so many people happy and smiling was priceless.
