Hello the topic for the essay is (what is the best advice you have ever received, and why?) and there i a 500 word maximum and i have about 553 can you help me shave the 53 words off and advice in any grammar or sentence corrections
It is difficult to live an economically stable life style. In today's society many people that have no more than a high school diploma are struggling to maintain a decent quality of life. My father once told me to "study hard so you can play hard"; my father gave me those words of advice to help me understand the payoff of a good education. My father wants me to have the better things in life, and without a college degree that is not possible. Life is too expensive and difficult, life would be much simpler with a college degree and necessary to succeed and be someone.
There are many unemployed citizens that are having a difficult time finding a job because they did lack a college degree. Lacking a college degree creates obstacles due to the rising costs of necessities. For example an average home in Miami, Fl is now $350,000, which is very expensive for people earning an average salary. Then you have all the medical, auto and home expenses that are very costly. So one must study hard in order to earn a salary to provide for a financially stable life.
Once you graduate from graduate school it becomes a breeze to find a job. For example my uncle is a pharmacist recruiter in California, and he offers students straight out of graduate school a $32,000 signing bonus on top of a $150,000 salary. The income of a graduate that accepts that offer is more than a person with a high school degree makes in several years, maybe a lifetime. Also professionals tend to have many benefits such as raises, vacation, and bonuses. That shows that you must study hard so your desires are easier to obtain.
One must study hard to become someone and be able to have the better things in life. Being a successful professional means a lot to a lot of people including family, teachers, and most importantly yourself. Just the thought of knowing you are someone important would make you feel good about yourself and confidence is key to living a content lifestyle. For example, I have an older brother that is about to graduate law school and it looks as if he will become a successful lawyer. He knows it so it seems to make him work harder so he can have a rich life. My father always told my brother and myself to study hard so we can enjoy life. We took his words of wisdom and are following it exactly, because we know he is right.
The quote "study hard so you can play hard" was told to me by my father. Those words mean exactly what they state, to study and work hard so you can have the better things in life. My father wants me to be as content as possible so he uses those words to motivate me to go to college and study as hard as possible so when I finish I could have the better things in life and a certificate stating I am a professional at what I choose to be. Society is too difficult and expensive to not have gone to college, going to college would make life a lot easier, and lastly a college degree will help me in my goal to be someone successful.
It is difficult to live an economically stable life style. In today's society many people that have no more than a high school diploma are struggling to maintain a decent quality of life. My father once told me to "study hard so you can play hard"; my father gave me those words of advice to help me understand the payoff of a good education. My father wants me to have the better things in life, and without a college degree that is not possible. Life is too expensive and difficult, life would be much simpler with a college degree and necessary to succeed and be someone.
There are many unemployed citizens that are having a difficult time finding a job because they did lack a college degree. Lacking a college degree creates obstacles due to the rising costs of necessities. For example an average home in Miami, Fl is now $350,000, which is very expensive for people earning an average salary. Then you have all the medical, auto and home expenses that are very costly. So one must study hard in order to earn a salary to provide for a financially stable life.
Once you graduate from graduate school it becomes a breeze to find a job. For example my uncle is a pharmacist recruiter in California, and he offers students straight out of graduate school a $32,000 signing bonus on top of a $150,000 salary. The income of a graduate that accepts that offer is more than a person with a high school degree makes in several years, maybe a lifetime. Also professionals tend to have many benefits such as raises, vacation, and bonuses. That shows that you must study hard so your desires are easier to obtain.
One must study hard to become someone and be able to have the better things in life. Being a successful professional means a lot to a lot of people including family, teachers, and most importantly yourself. Just the thought of knowing you are someone important would make you feel good about yourself and confidence is key to living a content lifestyle. For example, I have an older brother that is about to graduate law school and it looks as if he will become a successful lawyer. He knows it so it seems to make him work harder so he can have a rich life. My father always told my brother and myself to study hard so we can enjoy life. We took his words of wisdom and are following it exactly, because we know he is right.
The quote "study hard so you can play hard" was told to me by my father. Those words mean exactly what they state, to study and work hard so you can have the better things in life. My father wants me to be as content as possible so he uses those words to motivate me to go to college and study as hard as possible so when I finish I could have the better things in life and a certificate stating I am a professional at what I choose to be. Society is too difficult and expensive to not have gone to college, going to college would make life a lot easier, and lastly a college degree will help me in my goal to be someone successful.