Brown PLME other interests supplement - music, piano

i'm afraid if i answered the prompt wrong. was i supposed to focus on only one subject rather than 3(4)? does it not flow well? am i jumping from one topic to another too quickly? do i need a conclusion?

also if someone would check my grammer that would be wonderful. thanks!

Since the Program in Liberal Medical Education espouses a broad-based liberal education, please describe your fields of interest in both the sciences and the liberal arts. Be specific about what courses and aspects of the program will be woven into a potential educational plan.

As long as it is about reaching my goals, science is my first priority. But even though my future goals lie in my expertise in the sciences, I also have other interests that I want to explore while participating in the Program in Liberal Medical Education.

I have always wanted to take Latin. Though the language may not be used any longer, I find it to be a very useful language to know, since it is essentially the mother of nearly all the Western languages. That and the fact that many terms in the sciences are derived from its roots stir my curiosity to learn it. I am interested in taking the "Introduction to Latin" course and "Essentials of the Latin Language," perhaps then moving onto the "Introduction to Latin Literature" course. Hopefully with knowledge in the language of Latin, learning other language such as Spanish or French, or even just the terminology in the sciences, will prove beneficial in the future.

As a child, I've always been interested in ethics and philosophy. Since elementary school to now, when I couldn't sleep, I thought. I thought about everything, from what the purpose of life could be to a society vs. family debate. Though I do this less now, because of the little time to think when there are AP statistics problems waiting for me to finish through every night, I am still curious, and I still want to go back to those days when I could ponder the world's secrets and never find an answer. Classes such as "Introduction to Analytic Philosophy" or "Contemporary Moral Problems" appeal to me as interesting courses that could stimulate critical thinking. I would also like to take the "Science, Perception, and Reality" course along with a class on logic.

Art and music are subjects that I will always have with me. Growing up with piano and later on, flute as well, music has always been prevalent in my life, and even through my transition to independence, that will not change: the harmonious sounds will continue to play a part in my life. I am looking into taking the wind ensemble course along with the "Introduction to Composition" course. And with my alter ego, the amateur artist, within me, I will continue to draw out my dreams and color the world. Hopefully my artistic skills could improve by taking classes such as "Studio Foundation" and "Accessorizing Painting." So long as my eyes can see, and my ears can hear, so long will I be the musician and artist that accompany the aspiring physician I am to the path of success.

So long as my eyes can see, and my ears can hear, so long will I be the musician and artist that accompany the aspiring physician I am to the path of success.

As it is now, this sentence doesn't make much sense. But try to change so long as to as long as, but you'll have to alter the rest of the sentence a bit too.

THNX for reading my essay earlier, I can't believe those stupid mistakes escaped me.

Anyway, I really liked your response to the question.

As long as it is about reaching my goals, S cience is my first priority. But even though my future goals lie in my expertise in the sciences, I also have other interests that I want to explore while participating in the Program in Liberal Medical Education.

I have always wanted to take Latin. Though the language may not be used any longer, I find it to be a very useful language to know, since it is essentially the mother of nearly all the Western languages. That and the fact that many terms in the sciences are derived from its roots stir my curiosity to learn it. I am interested in taking the "Introduction to Latin" course and "Essentials of the Latin Language," perhaps then moving onto the "Introduction to Latin Literature" course . Hopefully with knowledge in the language of Latin, learning other language such as Spanish or French, or even just the terminology in the sciences, will prove beneficial in the future.

You should put a transition here.
As a child, I've always been interested in ethics and philosophy. Since elementary school to now, when I couldn't sleep, I thought. I thought about everything, from what the purpose of life could be to a society vs. family debate. Though I do this less now, because of the little time to think when there are AP statistics problems waiting for me to finish through every night, I am still curious, and I still want to go back to those days when I could ponder the world's secrets and never find an answer. Classes such as "Introduction to Analytic Philosophy" or "Contemporary Moral Problems" appeal to me as interesting courses that could stimulate critical thinking. I would also like to take the "Science, Perception, and Reality" course along with a class on logic. -you don't need it.

The insight on your plan is good! I feel that you should connect latin, philosophy, and art though. You state them as separate points, and it takes off from the fluidity of your entire essay.

Good luck!