Okay i want my essay to be interesting its about my career goals. How can i make it catch their attention without saying my goal are blah blah ...
My career goals - need help getting started
"Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud, and how does it relate to the person you are?"
I'm a firm believer that every microscopic thing that happens in life, happens for a reason. It starts way back in junior high. I tried out for every sport available basketball, volleyball, track, and cross country. I just was not good at any of them. I wanted to be part of a team so badly. I remember going to my brother's football games. I could not wait to see the halftime show. These beautiful girls wearing all sequins and white boots would march onto the field, and I would just be memorized by everything they did. Right then I knew I wanted to be a Bowie Belle. Soon enough I was trying out for the team, and I didn't make it. The director offered me to be the manager and of course I accepted. The following year I made the team. I was thrilled and dancing became easier to me. Now by my senior year I've earned various awards, and I love dancing it's my passion. I'm so happy I can say I have a passion now, something I am good at, and something people say "Amy you inspire me". Why I say everything happens for a reason is simple look at the beginning and where it took you.
What do you think???
I'm a firm believer that every microscopic thing that happens in life, happens for a reason. It starts way back in junior high. I tried out for every sport available basketball, volleyball, track, and cross country. I just was not good at any of them. I wanted to be part of a team so badly. I remember going to my brother's football games. I could not wait to see the halftime show. These beautiful girls wearing all sequins and white boots would march onto the field, and I would just be memorized by everything they did. Right then I knew I wanted to be a Bowie Belle. Soon enough I was trying out for the team, and I didn't make it. The director offered me to be the manager and of course I accepted. The following year I made the team. I was thrilled and dancing became easier to me. Now by my senior year I've earned various awards, and I love dancing it's my passion. I'm so happy I can say I have a passion now, something I am good at, and something people say "Amy you inspire me". Why I say everything happens for a reason is simple look at the beginning and where it took you.
What do you think???
You can use one specific indcident or occurance that has enabled you to have this goal. Colleges sometimes ask to name a specific life changing experience. In your case, you can use that experience and reveal how that created this goal.
I always tell people they should be purposeful in writing admissions essays. you should have a strategy. your strategy has to be a strategy for influencing the person to accept you.
Therefore, it is useful to present yourself as someone who is single-minded about her career decision... completely passionate about the career choice AND this school. You have to impress them by showing that you are already knowledgeable about your chosen field, and then you have to impress them with how much you know about the resources that make this school absolutely perfect for you.
You have to make them feel like you are so motivated and passionate -- about a plan that involves attending this school --that rejecting you would be a crime against humanity!
Therefore, it is useful to present yourself as someone who is single-minded about her career decision... completely passionate about the career choice AND this school. You have to impress them by showing that you are already knowledgeable about your chosen field, and then you have to impress them with how much you know about the resources that make this school absolutely perfect for you.
You have to make them feel like you are so motivated and passionate -- about a plan that involves attending this school --that rejecting you would be a crime against humanity!