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"Challenging" would be the first word that I would use to describe Boston. Why BU is a good fit.



jenjen33 1 / -  
Dec 21, 2015   #1
In no more than 250 words, please tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission.

Meeting new people and having novel experiences are things that I am never tired of. Ever since I was in high school, I have always looked forward to enter college where I can take an initiative and constantly challenge myself. Through the information from my guidance counselor and BU's website, I learned that Boston University is definitely where I can pursue my passion.

"Challenging" would be the first word that I would use to describe Boston. Since challenges shade my life more colorfully and meaningfully, I am eager to be a part of Boston, taking a step outside of my boundaries. Having studied as an international student in an American high school, I have faced small and large challenges throughout my high school career. I am fully aware of how astonishing it feels to eventually vanquish a limitation. Since Boston is a notably challenging school, which strives to foster a dynamic and rigorous learning environment, I strongly believe that Boston's philosophy lines up perfectly with my vision. Especially, I am highly interested in BU's College of Art and Science, which fosters knowledge of wide spectrum and values uniqueness.

Boston offers me more than just the great reputation; it is BU's uniqueness and rigorousness that enthralls me the most. With the help of BU, I will be successful after college and be able to make a place for myself. I can imagine myself thriving at BU, knee-deep in coursework and loving every minute of it.

guys-how do you think about this essay? :) any thoughts or comments would be truly appreciated.
Thanks in advance :)

ckko817 2 / 5  
Dec 21, 2015   #2
it lacks a lot of specifics, which colleges like to see in these type of "why this college?" essays. try to add more details regarding certain research opportunities you would like to explore, as well as some professors you find to be intriguing, etc...

well written but too vague.


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