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Waterloo Short Essay
Prompt:Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo.
If you have applied to more than one program please discuss your interest in each program. (900 character limit)
My perennial fascination towards theoretical physics and aptitude for applied mathematics steered me to venture into the diverse field of
mechanics. I want to bring the gadgets and ideas bouncing in my head to life and debut them on an international stage, casting world-changing
innovations and inventions as lead actors, and I believe Waterloo is the perfect Director.
Waterloo's well-oiled Co-Op program will not only provide me a plethora of priceless work experience, but also help me establish
vital networks with involved individuals and industries. Moreover, I want to firsthand experience Nobel Laureate Dr. Strickland's lectures,
furthering my intellectual curiosity and never ending desire to learn. Justin Trudeau described Waterloo's indispensable ingredient,
diversity, as the engine of invention. With me I bring the cultures and ideas of a subcontinent, my irreplaceable assets.