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"Chemical engine"; NYU Sup: Academic interests?



ayu0006 8 / 17  
Dec 29, 2012   #1
What are your own academic interests? Feel free to share any thoughts on any particular programs or how you might explore those interests at NYU on any of our campuses.

Our body is a chemical engine. We continue to develop; organs constantly carry out their functions, and maintenance of homeostasis is always ongoing. But as dissected as "chemical engine" is to the various pieces, even that is open to further anatomizing. We are alive because the fundamental units of matter, atoms, are constantly reacting inside of us. Trillions of chemical reactions are reacting each second. This is what kindles excitement in me, the study of biochemistry. I wish to be able to learn about the biological processes that occur in organisms. And I so dearly wish to understand how biological molecules give rise to processes that occur within a living cell. And to be able to indulge myself with studies of such magnitude I wish to put use NYU's plentiful resources and faculty members. But first and foremost I must start working my way up so to strive for the internships in the Molecular Biology Laboratory or to immerse myself with other undergraduate research opportunities. With NYU's renowned professors, the universities knowledge and a synthesis of my diligence, I hope to touch upon the various areas of biology and to construct a substantial platform for my career. I hope to be exposed to the various techniques of experimenting. Ultimately with NYU's aid I hope to accumulate my skills to a point of indispensable multifariousness that can not only be of a significant use to the field of biochemistry but to the general biological field as well.

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j814wong 3 / 9  
Dec 29, 2012   #2
As the other replyer said, at some pats, it seemed like you just took out a thesaurus too often. It almost seems insincere and forced when you use those complex words too much.
mercedes1923 4 / 8  
Dec 29, 2012   #3
With the advice of j814wong, your essay will be better! It's a good essay!


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