About my choice of "Art"; Short answer - Written answers

Hello everybody,

Need opinions on the short answer.

Topic:
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (150 words or fewer).

Short Answer:
About my choice of "Art"; I have yet to show my work or my talent, and I haven't won any national awards I can detail about.

Yet, my dedication is serious, and creating is my passion; It has always been this way, ever since I was a toddler. I endlessly draw or write stories; mold characters or imagine situations. No matter what surface or material I craft on I need to give form to my ideas.

Art always had an important role in my life. I believe that creating is leaving a trace of our existence, detailing how we progressively change depending on our states of mind and becoming more complex with time.

Please give me honest opinions and don't be afraid to hurt my feelings. Even if I cry.

Don't capitalize It after the semi-colon.

Yet, my dedication is serious, and creating is my passion; it has always been this way, ever since I was a toddler.

I endlessly draw or write stories; mold characters or imagine situations. No matter what surface or material I craft on I need to give form to my ideas.

Art always had an important role in my life. Let's get rid of all this, because it is redundant and focuses too much on childhood. Talk about your current art projects and your intentions for your artistic work in college.

This is cool: I believe that creating is leaving a trace of our existence, detailing how we progressively change depending on our states of mind and becoming more complex with time.

Don't cry! There is no reason to cry.

In your statement, although you show that you have no "art" choices, you can still tell of the current works you are doing, like EF_Kevin has mentioned. Also, don't be afraid to let your current passion fuel your short statement!