University of Wisconsin Madison
Tell us about your academic goals, circumstances that may have had an impact on your academic performance, and, in general, anything else you would like us to know in making an admission decision.
Can u see if its good, coz englishz my 2nd and need proofs
In coming from a far country of Korea where culture and education system was a lot different, I inevitably faced difficulty adjusting to new American education. First the school where I enrolled to did not have any ESL classes, which made it a whole lot tougher for me in studying the classes where English is essential. Initially I made good grades getting As and honor rolls. I was focused and determined to strive to achieve excellence despite language difficulties. However as time went by, I began to lose my focus on academic studies. Being an adolescent with uncontrollable hormones overtaking body and mind, most of my attention was devoted to many of the girls to who have captured both my heart and mind. Also because I had personality in which if I set attention on one thing, I devoted whole of myself into it obsessively and anything outside of the interest blurs and fades as if they don't matter.
It was after finishing 10th grade that I regained my priorities as I realized my obsession was deteriorating my grades. I woke out of inattentive state of mind of which if it had continued, it would have had devastating mark on my life in general. During the summer I came to realize myself in general, my goals and hopes, my values and belief, and most definitely my dreams and the steps to take to realize that dream. Therefore I worked through my 11th grade with my priorities set in right place. And in the end of the year, I achieved A honor roll.
Now my ultimate goal is to be accepted to University of Wisconsin Madison where I can explore my studies in most fulfilling manner because of its excellent educational environment and programs. I also look forward to connect to the network and be part of exceling student body of University of Wisconsin Madison.
My academic goal in the University is to complete in business major. The reason for this major is because I am often curious on how the practical world operates. For instance, I find myself naturally wondering on the operations and daily interactions that take place at businesses such as Wal-Mart, fast-food restaurant, and grocery stores. Also since business is fundamentally the study of human interactions, I believe it is essential study no matter what type of path I choose after graduating.
Tell us about your academic goals, circumstances that may have had an impact on your academic performance, and, in general, anything else you would like us to know in making an admission decision.
Can u see if its good, coz englishz my 2nd and need proofs
In coming from a far country of Korea where culture and education system was a lot different, I inevitably faced difficulty adjusting to new American education. First the school where I enrolled to did not have any ESL classes, which made it a whole lot tougher for me in studying the classes where English is essential. Initially I made good grades getting As and honor rolls. I was focused and determined to strive to achieve excellence despite language difficulties. However as time went by, I began to lose my focus on academic studies. Being an adolescent with uncontrollable hormones overtaking body and mind, most of my attention was devoted to many of the girls to who have captured both my heart and mind. Also because I had personality in which if I set attention on one thing, I devoted whole of myself into it obsessively and anything outside of the interest blurs and fades as if they don't matter.
It was after finishing 10th grade that I regained my priorities as I realized my obsession was deteriorating my grades. I woke out of inattentive state of mind of which if it had continued, it would have had devastating mark on my life in general. During the summer I came to realize myself in general, my goals and hopes, my values and belief, and most definitely my dreams and the steps to take to realize that dream. Therefore I worked through my 11th grade with my priorities set in right place. And in the end of the year, I achieved A honor roll.
Now my ultimate goal is to be accepted to University of Wisconsin Madison where I can explore my studies in most fulfilling manner because of its excellent educational environment and programs. I also look forward to connect to the network and be part of exceling student body of University of Wisconsin Madison.
My academic goal in the University is to complete in business major. The reason for this major is because I am often curious on how the practical world operates. For instance, I find myself naturally wondering on the operations and daily interactions that take place at businesses such as Wal-Mart, fast-food restaurant, and grocery stores. Also since business is fundamentally the study of human interactions, I believe it is essential study no matter what type of path I choose after graduating.
