This is my elaboration on a personal activity. Can you give me any pointers please.
Music is my life. Writing and listening to it gives me an indescribable positive feeling. I wake up, eat,work, study, and sleep with melodies in my head. While I was growing up in my mom's belly, my father used to place the stereo close to her. I always had wondered if that's the reason why I like music so much. I wanted to be a professional singer but hearing myself sing in the shower quickly changed my mind. Music makes my day. It can change my moods, emotions and thoughts in a snap. When I'm sad it makes me happy, if I'm distracted it helps me focus. I think that without music my little platonic world wouldn't exist. Even thought I might never be a recording artist, if there is music in my life, there is one more reason to keep me going. (149 words)
Music is my life. Writing and listening to it gives me an indescribable positive feeling. I wake up, eat,work, study, and sleep with melodies in my head. While I was growing up in my mom's belly, my father used to place the stereo close to her. I always had wondered if that's the reason why I like music so much. I wanted to be a professional singer but hearing myself sing in the shower quickly changed my mind. Music makes my day. It can change my moods, emotions and thoughts in a snap. When I'm sad it makes me happy, if I'm distracted it helps me focus. I think that without music my little platonic world wouldn't exist. Even thought I might never be a recording artist, if there is music in my life, there is one more reason to keep me going. (149 words)