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Since I was young, I had a fantasy about a rock band such as Muse. So, as a singer recognized by my mother, I asked my friends to start our own fantasy, and five-member band, (NAME), was finally organized. I listened and hummed to the songs for our debut concert everywhere, every time.
The judgment day finally came. All excited, yet nervous, the members walked into the stage. The drummer counts in to the fantasy: "One, two, three, four". While performing, we started recognizing each other's mistakes, which released our tension, and we found ourselves laughing. Singing aloud, running across the stage, jumping higher than ever, and sweating heavily. The performing time passed in a moment. (BAND)'s debut was not perfect like Muse's concert, but perfectly enjoyable for us.
With inextinguishable passion, our practice and performance continued; eventually, we have even performed in local rock-cafes. The fantasy developed me to a more ardent, adventurous and confident dreamer.
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Since I was young, I had a fantasy about a rock band such as Muse. So, as a singer recognized by my mother, I asked my friends to start our own fantasy, and five-member band, (NAME), was finally organized. I listened and hummed to the songs for our debut concert everywhere, every time.
The judgment day finally came. All excited, yet nervous, the members walked into the stage. The drummer counts in to the fantasy: "One, two, three, four". While performing, we started recognizing each other's mistakes, which released our tension, and we found ourselves laughing. Singing aloud, running across the stage, jumping higher than ever, and sweating heavily. The performing time passed in a moment. (BAND)'s debut was not perfect like Muse's concert, but perfectly enjoyable for us.
With inextinguishable passion, our practice and performance continued; eventually, we have even performed in local rock-cafes. The fantasy developed me to a more ardent, adventurous and confident dreamer.
(998)
Thank you for reading and commenting again :)
