Hi there. I was looking for some feedback on my CommonApp short answer, as I'm not sure whether it elaborates on my theatre experience as they want me too. Happy to respond in kind.
In my time at Winchester College, I directed two plays, God Bless America, a satire on the 2008 presidential election which I wrote in my fourth year, and Henrik Ibsen's Ghosts in my fifth year.
The experience of directing Ghosts is among those I most value from my school experience. Leading a small group, with a cast of only five, let me work intimately and intensively to develop strong, complex characters. Amid this high-stress environment, I built wonderful friendships, while learning the necessity of friction to keen performances: our most productive rehearsals were always those which nearly dissolved in intense argument. After the curtain fell, I was left with a deeper appreciation for theatre, and an understanding of how intimacy and distance, amity and aggravation, must both be introduced to make any cooperative endeavour a success.
In my time at Winchester College, I directed two plays, God Bless America, a satire on the 2008 presidential election which I wrote in my fourth year, and Henrik Ibsen's Ghosts in my fifth year.
The experience of directing Ghosts is among those I most value from my school experience. Leading a small group, with a cast of only five, let me work intimately and intensively to develop strong, complex characters. Amid this high-stress environment, I built wonderful friendships, while learning the necessity of friction to keen performances: our most productive rehearsals were always those which nearly dissolved in intense argument. After the curtain fell, I was left with a deeper appreciation for theatre, and an understanding of how intimacy and distance, amity and aggravation, must both be introduced to make any cooperative endeavour a success.