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The topic is: We all exist within communities or groups of various sizes, origins, and purposes; pick one and tell us why it is important to you, and how it has shaped you. ( limit is 1000 characters)
The director raises his arms, agitates his baton, and the glorious melody starts. Everyone follows their leader, playing their own instrument. Despite the fact each produces a different tune at different frequencies, it is the final product the one that impacts the crowd and fills the room with magnificent melody. They are a community.
A community is a conglomeration of individuals who share a common interest. In an orchestra the love for music is a common feeling for all its members.
Every member is important or the community would not work to its optimum. The musicians need as much their instruments as they need each other and their director. Without a director the music would not be harmonious; without the musicians no music at all could be played.
Being part of this community has helped me become persistent. I have been able to play songs that are challenging for me, despite their difficulty I go for them. Band has helped me to become a goal achiever.
Thanks in advance!
The topic is: We all exist within communities or groups of various sizes, origins, and purposes; pick one and tell us why it is important to you, and how it has shaped you. ( limit is 1000 characters)
The director raises his arms, agitates his baton, and the glorious melody starts. Everyone follows their leader, playing their own instrument. Despite the fact each produces a different tune at different frequencies, it is the final product the one that impacts the crowd and fills the room with magnificent melody. They are a community.
A community is a conglomeration of individuals who share a common interest. In an orchestra the love for music is a common feeling for all its members.
Every member is important or the community would not work to its optimum. The musicians need as much their instruments as they need each other and their director. Without a director the music would not be harmonious; without the musicians no music at all could be played.
Being part of this community has helped me become persistent. I have been able to play songs that are challenging for me, despite their difficulty I go for them. Band has helped me to become a goal achiever.
Thanks in advance!
