Convey your interest: visual, theatre, arts, sports, music, gourmet, cooking - UA&P Entrance Essay

Please Review my UA&P entrance Essay. PLEASE SUGGEST ANY IDEA.

"Type an essay that conveys your interest (visual/ theatre arts, sports, music, gourmet, cooking, etc.), accomplishments, family, educational, entrepreneurial, and social experiences; future goals, including your strengths, weaknesses and your potential which will positively contribute to the development of the University" (Maximum 250 words)

I have always loved singing. Songs by various singers like Ed Sheeran and John Mayer. It has given me the chance to enhance my self-esteem to a higher level, and has helped me to get through bad situations in my life. Another thing that has formed me to what I am now is helping others, by donating clothing, food, etc. to the poor, to the sick, and to the needy.

The things I hate most about myself, in terms of study habits, is that I tend to get distracted a lot. But even though I tend to do this, i actually find ways on how to finish my work; I do this by organizing my schedule, and setting my mind straight.

There are a lot of things that I need to achieve in life but, as a starter; I have to get myself on the right track. As a student, I am also inclined to study the different ways on making a business of my own. To do this, I need to get into a prestigious university, no other than UA&P. I know that this university will get me in the right track of achieving my future goal in life, and that is to be a successful Business Woman.

You need to search for personal statement formats to get a better idea of how the paper should be written. You need to link your ideas together instead of random statements about yourself. Link your background to what degree and career you would like to do. What interests do you have that has lead you to this conclusion?

Something like....I struggled through poverty as a child and through this, I developed sympathy and the desire to assist people that struggle to climb the social and economic ladder in this country. It drives my passion to help others and has helped me come to the realization that I want to make a career out of helping people in any way I can. Therefore I have chosen to pursue a degree in social work and hope to attend your esteemed social program at "whatever" University. I feel that your undergraduate program can help me in yada yada ways and so forth....get it?

Hope this helps!