Please Review my UA&P entrance Essay. PLEASE SUGGEST ANY IDEA.
"Type an essay that conveys your interest (visual/ theatre arts, sports, music, gourmet, cooking, etc.), accomplishments, family, educational, entrepreneurial, and social experiences; future goals, including your strengths, weaknesses and your potential which will positively contribute to the development of the University" (Maximum 250 words)
I have always loved singing. Songs by various singers like Ed Sheeran and John Mayer. It has given me the chance to enhance my self-esteem to a higher level, and has helped me to get through bad situations in my life. Another thing that has formed me to what I am now is helping others, by donating clothing, food, etc. to the poor, to the sick, and to the needy.
The things I hate most about myself, in terms of study habits, is that I tend to get distracted a lot. But even though I tend to do this, i actually find ways on how to finish my work; I do this by organizing my schedule, and setting my mind straight.
There are a lot of things that I need to achieve in life but, as a starter; I have to get myself on the right track. As a student, I am also inclined to study the different ways on making a business of my own. To do this, I need to get into a prestigious university, no other than UA&P. I know that this university will get me in the right track of achieving my future goal in life, and that is to be a successful Business Woman.
"Type an essay that conveys your interest (visual/ theatre arts, sports, music, gourmet, cooking, etc.), accomplishments, family, educational, entrepreneurial, and social experiences; future goals, including your strengths, weaknesses and your potential which will positively contribute to the development of the University" (Maximum 250 words)
I have always loved singing. Songs by various singers like Ed Sheeran and John Mayer. It has given me the chance to enhance my self-esteem to a higher level, and has helped me to get through bad situations in my life. Another thing that has formed me to what I am now is helping others, by donating clothing, food, etc. to the poor, to the sick, and to the needy.
The things I hate most about myself, in terms of study habits, is that I tend to get distracted a lot. But even though I tend to do this, i actually find ways on how to finish my work; I do this by organizing my schedule, and setting my mind straight.
There are a lot of things that I need to achieve in life but, as a starter; I have to get myself on the right track. As a student, I am also inclined to study the different ways on making a business of my own. To do this, I need to get into a prestigious university, no other than UA&P. I know that this university will get me in the right track of achieving my future goal in life, and that is to be a successful Business Woman.
