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Being creative, rather than carefully planning, will be the best solution to solve a



green1 1 / 1  
Nov 20, 2010   #1
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Being creative, rather than carefully planning, will be the best solution to solve a problem.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

What will be the best solution to resolve an encountered problem, either a creative way or a careful plan? From my perspective, carefully planning is the key to succeed in cracking a hard nut. My explanation and reasons go as follows.

First of all, we have to go through whole thing thoroughly in order to make a thoughtful plan since its importance can never be ignored to a problem solver. And this can bring us an effective resolution to settle the problem. Take an interview for example. We need to do lots of preparation before the interview to be sure we can get the offer successfully. For instance, we go through the job description over and over, and we prepare a great number of questions regarding our knowledge, experience, and the background information about company the in case when we come cross those questions, we will be confident, not in panic. Meanwhile, we will also choose a formal suit in order to make a good impression to the employee at the first.

In addition, carefully planning can reduce the risk of fail in the problem resolving. In a complicated situation, any risk can lead to the failure completely. Therefore, we have to be very cautious. There are great deals of cases in business, which went bankrupt or were put in a crisis due to a thoughtless planning. And the failure would be totally avoid if they were more careful when they designed the project.

To sum up, from the above discussion, carefully planning can help us watch the issue comprehensively, bring us an effective method for the problem, and decrease the risk when we try to resolve the problem.

engdetective 6 / 24  
Nov 20, 2010   #2
Hey there,

I really like the fact that you have incorporated examples from different point of views, yet from my personal perspective, I think you should have elaborated more on just one of them, while leaving the other be. Perhaps using a personal example, a simple anecdote would illustrate your point better.

My explanation and reasons go as follows. To me this sentence seems lacking and clumsy. It is obvious that you are going to explain the forthcoming paragraphs why do you hold such a belief, so maybe you should change it something like :

From my perspective, carefully planning is the key to succeed in cracking a hard nut, as we can perceive in different life situations.

Hope I was of any help :)
OP green1 1 / 1  
Nov 20, 2010   #3
Really thanks a lot for the commend and advice. They are truly helpful. Thanks again.


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