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Much of the work that students do at Emerson College is a form of storytelling. If you were to write the story of your life until now, what would you title it and why? Please be brief (100-200 words)
For the past seventeen years, I think the journey also known as my life can be titled into one simple word: cupcake. "Cupcake" fully explains my growth as a person, both literally and metaphorically. Ever since I was a little girl, the colors of icing and the fluffiness of cupcakes used to mesmerize me. As I grew older, I began to learn how to bake and decorate them the same way I used to see them when I was younger. I crave to eat these beautiful creations to satisfy my sweet tooth yet I also crave to create them because the mere process of baking cake and fluffing icing symbolize the kind of person I have grown to be. Seeing the cupcakes for the first time is like realizing and reaching my goals. At first, I am amazed and intrigued. Then, as I grow older, I learn the ingredients I need, the effort required of me, the patience I must practice, and the motivation I need to reach my destination. In the end, I gain personal satisfaction, from personal accomplishments and personal pleasure in my mouth.
Help with content, grammar, transitions, smoothness.
I feel like i can write this to make it more simple and smooth better.. any suggestions?
I'll gladly help in return!
Much of the work that students do at Emerson College is a form of storytelling. If you were to write the story of your life until now, what would you title it and why? Please be brief (100-200 words)
For the past seventeen years, I think the journey also known as my life can be titled into one simple word: cupcake. "Cupcake" fully explains my growth as a person, both literally and metaphorically. Ever since I was a little girl, the colors of icing and the fluffiness of cupcakes used to mesmerize me. As I grew older, I began to learn how to bake and decorate them the same way I used to see them when I was younger. I crave to eat these beautiful creations to satisfy my sweet tooth yet I also crave to create them because the mere process of baking cake and fluffing icing symbolize the kind of person I have grown to be. Seeing the cupcakes for the first time is like realizing and reaching my goals. At first, I am amazed and intrigued. Then, as I grow older, I learn the ingredients I need, the effort required of me, the patience I must practice, and the motivation I need to reach my destination. In the end, I gain personal satisfaction, from personal accomplishments and personal pleasure in my mouth.