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'the difficulty of making money' -COMMON APP short answer



miii 2 / 1  
Dec 24, 2011   #1
Can you help me edit my essay?

Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below.

I was awakened at 5am by two alarms I set not to be late for job and I went to work rubbing my eyes. I worked at convenience store for one year. In spite of low paying job, I had many things I have to do: casher, cleaning, handling phone calls, helping customers mail packages, baking breads, deep frying chicken and French fries, etc. I was also entrusted with training new staff. The most difficulty I faced was to deal with irrational customer complaints and unreasonable demands. I controlled the feelings of irritation and served my customers politely with a smile. I considered that it was very good opportunity for observing people to meet various people regardless of age or sex through my job, because I thought I was able to improve my ability to judge character by observing people. Positively thinking so, I was able to enjoy my job. At the same time, I learned the difficulty of making money and it involved responsibility.

ZhoeK 5 / 157  
Dec 24, 2011   #2
I did not quite grasp what you were trying to say in the last sentences, but I still tried to make some sense out of it. Also hope I do not push you over the word limit.

Hope this helps!


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