The application says to write about what specific characteristics I can bring to St. Louis University in 75-100 words. I'm not sure if I should include talents, or just talk about my personality traits that make me a desirable student. I would really appreciate suggestions.
So here's a very very rough draft. It isn't even less than 100 words yet. Please take a look and tell me what I can improve on. Thanks!
"I have a rich background, to say the least. In the past couple of years, I have become a proficient writer and particularly enjoy writing short stories and poems. I have even been published in Teen Ink magazine and have written for Louie magazine. I am very involved in athletic activities. I was on my school's varsity track team and cross country team for two years. Since the school year ended, I have been attending yoga classes every week as well as weight-lifting. I also enjoy being an active member of my school and was in five clubs this past year alone. I have a deep compassion for animals, which motivated me to start volunteering at the Wildlife Center of MO; I hope to continue working with animals during college. This summer I began working for a small pet-sitting company and have enjoyed it immensely. During my time in high school, I took three years of French and have thoroughly benefited from the language and the culture that comes with it. One of my best qualities is my receptiveness to new or different thoughts. My friends say I'm very diplomatic and open-minded to new experiences."
So here's a very very rough draft. It isn't even less than 100 words yet. Please take a look and tell me what I can improve on. Thanks!
"I have a rich background, to say the least. In the past couple of years, I have become a proficient writer and particularly enjoy writing short stories and poems. I have even been published in Teen Ink magazine and have written for Louie magazine. I am very involved in athletic activities. I was on my school's varsity track team and cross country team for two years. Since the school year ended, I have been attending yoga classes every week as well as weight-lifting. I also enjoy being an active member of my school and was in five clubs this past year alone. I have a deep compassion for animals, which motivated me to start volunteering at the Wildlife Center of MO; I hope to continue working with animals during college. This summer I began working for a small pet-sitting company and have enjoyed it immensely. During my time in high school, I took three years of French and have thoroughly benefited from the language and the culture that comes with it. One of my best qualities is my receptiveness to new or different thoughts. My friends say I'm very diplomatic and open-minded to new experiences."
