This is for the common application short answer prompt:
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extra curricular activities or work experiences in the space below.
As soon as I got my driver's license I knew the next step for me was a job. Being in high school, I could only have a part-time, minimum wage job; I chose Fox's Pizza. It provided me with an adequate amount for spending and saving, but left me with little free time. Although I grew apart from a few, I quickly realized who my true friends were. Through the typical rolling dough, sprinkling cheese, and slicing vegetables, I developed friendships with many of my diverse coworkers. I never would have befriended these middle-aged, part-time workers or teenagers in my school from different social cliques if it was not for this job. What simply began as a check for college savings and new clothes, ended with lasting relationships with the most unexpected people.
Thank you very much in advance for your critiquing of my essay, I greatly appreciate it!
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extra curricular activities or work experiences in the space below.
As soon as I got my driver's license I knew the next step for me was a job. Being in high school, I could only have a part-time, minimum wage job; I chose Fox's Pizza. It provided me with an adequate amount for spending and saving, but left me with little free time. Although I grew apart from a few, I quickly realized who my true friends were. Through the typical rolling dough, sprinkling cheese, and slicing vegetables, I developed friendships with many of my diverse coworkers. I never would have befriended these middle-aged, part-time workers or teenagers in my school from different social cliques if it was not for this job. What simply began as a check for college savings and new clothes, ended with lasting relationships with the most unexpected people.
Thank you very much in advance for your critiquing of my essay, I greatly appreciate it!