Good job overall!
People like honesty as bees like honey.
...or "the same as" Better yet "People are drawn to honesty like bees to
toss out their philosophy
"Toss out" would work better for people who abandon
their philosophy. How about "people who hold rigidly to their philosophy despite clear evidence of its fallacy."
who don't insist on using the bathroom every Monday at 6 am.
<teehee...I hate when that happens! :)
Those people are
grounddid you mean to say "bound" ?? for great companionship and understanding.
even if you said "grounds" it sounds strange because 'grounds' is more like a 'reason' in this context. Hmmm.
I can pretty much get along with anyone
High-tech addicts, history lovers
orand music experts are all my friends.
I find great happiness
fromin getting to know and befriend with people at places I visit ed , from a the new Starbucks at the local mall, to a small, uptown, Big Boy restaurant.
Is there such a thing as a small, uptown, Big-Boy's restaurant?? Perhaps you meant to say, "small-town Big Boy's..."
These are minor issues. I hope this helps! I will be back tomorrow to see what you think and address the last part of your essay.