Hello Essay Forum,
Below is my essay on Emory and why I found it interesting. I would like harsh critiquing please and I need to shorten it to 250 and I'm etching close to 300, and again thank you!
What are the unique qualities of Emory University, and the specific school(s) to which you are applying (Emory College, Oxford College, or both), that make you want to become part of Emory University? In what ways do you hope to take advantage of the qualities you have identified?
Its inherent Emory University is infatuated with the number two. Ranked twentieth in U.S. News and World Report best colleges and national universities rankings, a pair of gentlemen donating over a hundred million dollars' worth of Coca Cola stocks to the school, or simply owning more than two million-square feet of Eco building; indeed, Emory has an impressive share of two's. As a student, the opportunity to attain both a Computer Engineering and Computer Science degree by the dual enrollment program in engineering with Georgia Institute of Technology is the pair I find most intriguing.
Many undergraduate schools offer dual enrollment but none deemed with international acclaim in research as Emory University does. The opportunity to study Computer Science at the Emory College of Arts and Science for three years will be a forthright affirmation that I will have one of the strongest technology and research resources the south has to offer. As well as with an average of less than 10:1 student teacher ratio, I will be surrounded by what I believe to be some of the most erudite students and professors very few will be able to experience. I will be in a sanguineous environment, inundated by peers and teachers of severe reverence who advocate nothing less than excellence. In those three years at Emory University, I will have the ability to attend a university that has unquestionably grasped its reputation as a world class university through its aspiration to offer its student the best education possible. I know that attending Emory University as a dual enrolled student I can attain both my dream of a Computer Engineering degree as well as my previous love of a Computer Science degree at a five year pace that any other student would love to call a domicile.
Below is my essay on Emory and why I found it interesting. I would like harsh critiquing please and I need to shorten it to 250 and I'm etching close to 300, and again thank you!
What are the unique qualities of Emory University, and the specific school(s) to which you are applying (Emory College, Oxford College, or both), that make you want to become part of Emory University? In what ways do you hope to take advantage of the qualities you have identified?
Its inherent Emory University is infatuated with the number two. Ranked twentieth in U.S. News and World Report best colleges and national universities rankings, a pair of gentlemen donating over a hundred million dollars' worth of Coca Cola stocks to the school, or simply owning more than two million-square feet of Eco building; indeed, Emory has an impressive share of two's. As a student, the opportunity to attain both a Computer Engineering and Computer Science degree by the dual enrollment program in engineering with Georgia Institute of Technology is the pair I find most intriguing.
Many undergraduate schools offer dual enrollment but none deemed with international acclaim in research as Emory University does. The opportunity to study Computer Science at the Emory College of Arts and Science for three years will be a forthright affirmation that I will have one of the strongest technology and research resources the south has to offer. As well as with an average of less than 10:1 student teacher ratio, I will be surrounded by what I believe to be some of the most erudite students and professors very few will be able to experience. I will be in a sanguineous environment, inundated by peers and teachers of severe reverence who advocate nothing less than excellence. In those three years at Emory University, I will have the ability to attend a university that has unquestionably grasped its reputation as a world class university through its aspiration to offer its student the best education possible. I know that attending Emory University as a dual enrolled student I can attain both my dream of a Computer Engineering degree as well as my previous love of a Computer Science degree at a five year pace that any other student would love to call a domicile.
