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Elaborate One of Your Activities - my father's golf club



op2607 7 / 1  
Nov 29, 2008   #1
In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words or fewer).

In my junior year, I worked in my father's golf club-Lao Lao Bay Golf Club-as just a common worker. I served food in the restaurant, I took care of the golf shop, and worked at the counter. For this, I did not get any payment. However, I learned something very important instead-I learned the value of money.

At times I just stood at the counter or in the corner of the golf shop and studied for school when there weren't that many customers. At times I was busy, running here and there, getting golf shoes and t-shirts of various sizes. At times I was in the restaurant, taking the customers' orders and serving food. Through these hardships and experiences I learned the value of money-how my parents and other parents work to feed, cloth, and teach their children, how it is very hard to earn money.

EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Nov 30, 2008   #2
In my junior year, I worked in my father's golf club, Lao Lao Bay Golf Club. I served food in the restaurant, I took care of the golf shop, and worked at the counter. For this, I did not get any payment. However, I learned something very important instead: the value of money.

At times when customers were few, I just stood at the counter or in the corner of the golf shop and studied for school. At times I was busy...

Nice job!! I only took out unnecessary words, so that it will pack a harder punch.


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