Most stories and television shows end with the words to be continuedwords 'to be continued'
cool first sentence. caught my attention.
It's amazing how life can surprise you and my life has thrown many hardships in my direction.
feel free to disagree but I don't like how you put "you" and "i" in the same sentence...
When I was younger my little town house caught on fire
when I was younger,
I lost all my belongings and my toys and a couple years later my father had a stroke and lost his job as a professional trumpet player on broadway.belongings and my toys. Couple years later, my...
For a while I lived my life in fear
For a while,
that anything that can go wrong will.
what's wrong will?
chool and made amazing friends and even though sometimes it seemed like I didn't have everything, I was happy with what I did
cut the sentence after friends. start new sentence with "even though".
It's off to a good start.
You have many comma mistakes here. Let your English teacher read through this and fix those for you. Maybe you can re-cite 'to be continued' at the end to bring it back to what you were talking about in the beginning because I don't see a connection between the two.