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english essay for college apps personal statement; my passion for photography



blueeyes816 2 / 4  
Oct 24, 2012   #1
I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT IM DOING :(

Snap snap snap my life in a flash, literally. I didn't know two people could have such an influence on someone's life. Maybe, my passion for photography came from my mother's artistic, adventurous side. It could have been influenced by my father's love of wildlife and nature. I grew up in a household with two parents that were very different from each other. My mom was the hard working businesswoman and my dad was a hunter-fisherman. I take after both of my parents but I express it through photography. I cannot take a picture that meets my standards if I'm not inspired. When I take pictures I try and capture the beauty of something smaller than us, something people don't stop to think about. I try and bring out the structure, and the natural beauty in the object. Because of my parents' contradictive personalities I've learned that the attitude you have toward something can change the outcome and personal views of a situation. I try and highlight the balance between two distinctive subjects by pulling the similarities out and creating a whole. My parents have not only influenced me to learn about photography, but they have also subconsciously taught me how to observe human distinctive behavior. Ever since I was little I've watched how people interact with other people. I find it fascinating, almost like colors on a color pallet blending into something new. We paint pictures with out personalities and the open world acts as our composition. I've always wondered how to capture the similarities in two personalities through my photography. Photography and psychology are two alike subjects that can relate in ways some people ....not done yet and im not really sure what else to say... :/

linmark 2 / 325  
Nov 5, 2012   #2
Cool essay - you have a good idea of yourself based on what you are writing. I like your parallel of photography and psychology as a good photographer definitely has strong observation skills and reflects his/her view of human behavior and psychology. So which are you applying to study?? You might want to wrap up the essay with some closing statement about that.

Oh - and may I suggest these corrections (in CAPS)
parents' contradictive (CONTRADICTORY or CONTRADICTING or CONFLICTING) personalities

observe human distinctive behavior.

We paint pictures with out (OUR) personalities


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