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"not entering college with a decided major" - Macalester Supplemental Essay



Rbaron 1 / -  
Nov 28, 2010   #1
Hello! This is a rough draft of my supplemental essay to Macalester so if anyone has feedback about content or grammar or anything, I'd love to hear it. I'm supposed to write about why I want to go to the college and what I would add to the campus.

My college search has been dominated by a holy grail-like quest for the perfect medium. I knew I wanted a liberal arts education college with a small campus and an intimate atmosphere. Yet I was worried about isolation and boredom in a college the size of my high school. I wanted a challenging course load but didn't want to slip through the cracks my freshman year.

My fears were assuaged when I started researching Macalester College. I immediately loved how the small-campus feel is preserved while still being surrounded by two cities that offer a contrasting world. In addition I see that the teachers are engaged and that the class sizes are small enough that it would be impossible to become too overwhelmed. Coming from a small town in New Jersey with very little diversity I would love to interact with and learn from students with radically different backgrounds.

Above all, I was very attracted to the academics aspect of Macalester. I have a strong work ethic, especially when it involves something I am interested in, and I want the kind of challenging workload that Macalester offers. Although I've had a life-long love affair with English and am very interested in Biology, I do not plan on entering college with a decided major. Macalester's liberal arts curriculum would not only allow me to pursue all the areas I am interested in such as psychology, film, and music but also expose me to subjects I had never considered before. Macalester professors take their subjects seriously and I think I would benefit a lot from their instruction. I am also attracted to how a Macalester education is not cut and dried but instead has a more unconventional approach with unique classes and programs like the Experimental College.

Aside from academics I believe that Macalester is a college that is easy to get involved in with so many clubs and organizations. At Macalester I would like to be a member of the literary magazine The Chanter and the newspaper Mac Weekly. I also play the violin, although not very seriously, and like that there are groups like the Flying Fingers that are open for everyone to participate in. Additionally, I love that Macalester is so socially aware and that it offers many opportunities to interact with surrounding communities and be engaged politically on campus. I like that Macalester has a sustainability office and takes environmental activism seriously as I care deeply about the environment. Although Macalester possess such a wealth of diversity, I believe that I could bring something to the campus as I love to get involved in as many activities as possibilities, am ambitious, and have an open mind.

Kimayu 5 / 25  
Nov 29, 2010   #2
Hi there.I think this is a great draft,you really did explain why Malcaster would be suitable for you.However,I think you should add more about what you are able to offer to the campus.

Although Macalester possess such a wealth of diversity, I believe that I could bring something to the campus as I love to get involved in as many activities as possibilities, am ambitious, and have an open mind.

-You should elaborate on this sentence to show them how you would enrich the campus.
Good Luck!
Could you please take a look at my essay:


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