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'the fear take control of me' - uber short supplement essay



pjw7109 7 / 23  
Dec 31, 2011   #1
Applying to college can be serious business; yet we're eager to get to know you in a less formal way. Have fun answering the following question: If you had a theme song - a piece of music that describes you best - what would it be and why? Please include the name of the song and the artist. (Limit response to 150 words)

DRIVE BY INCUBUS

Just like a person from the song, I used to let the fear take control of me and my 'wheel.' Everything about my future seemed vague and uncertain: whether I will get to finish high school in America in midst of my mother's illness, whether I can withstand my abusive host parents and many other worries. However, all those worries and uncertainties made me stronger. Those hardships made me a better, flexible and positive driver who can always find alternative routes. I realized that all I can do is take charge of my own life instead of some fear and doubts directing me. My favorite line is "when I drive myself, my light is found." I am now ready to "take the wheel and steer" because "Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there With open arms and open eyes."

SeniorMel 7 / 44  
Dec 31, 2011   #2
directed me. My favorite line is "when I drive myself, my light is found." I am now ready to "take the wheel and steer" because "Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there With open arms and open eyes."

Again it doesn't need many corrections.
OP pjw7109 7 / 23  
Dec 31, 2011   #3
i don't need help with this one anymore!
thanks!


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