I co-founded Muniversiti, a non-profit organization with the purpose of galvanizing the youth

Elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experience

In 2016 I co-founded Muniversiti, a non-profit organization with the purpose of galvanizing the youth. Muniversiti converges students from diverse demographics to deliberate over global challenges and delivers proposed solutions and the raised funds to qualified NGOs working at root-level. We've generated $40,000+, conducted 15+ conferences, associated with 23 NGOs as consulting partners and organized India's largest MUN conference.

As Director Training, I devise educational modules and deliver presentations to promote community engagement amongst local youth and help them develop fresh perspectives on problems hindering world's progress. I've interacted with 10,000+ students, conducted seminars in 50+ schools and chaired world's first MUN committee run entirely on Sign Language.

Whether it's by persuading Ministry of Social Justice to develop inclusive policies or planting 400 trees at a record-breaking pace, Muniversiti is a group of crazy individuals who refuse to accept that 'mere' students cannot manifest a world with greater opportunities.

Since the website for Muniversiti has been suspended, you should not use this as the reference point for your discussion. Once the internet search / vetting is done and the account suspension comes up for the website, your claims will come into question. it is best to use only verifiable and unquestionable information for this presentation. Remember, everything you claim to do, or be a part of, as well as your position in such organizations will be vetted. To avoid any question as to the accuracy of your claims, do not leave anything to chance.

Don't use a reference that comes up as "account suspended" when the internet search is done. An internet search will be done because you claim that it is a "non-profit organization" and therefore, more information about Muniversiti and your participation in it will be required by the reviewer. Try to use another extra curricular activity or work experience for this presentation. One that, should an internet search be done, comes up with a positive image of your claims.

The reviewer is concerned about the validity of your claims. Which is why you should avoid any instance of question in your essay. Since the internet is the default verification place these days, seeing an "account suspended" notice with the URL for this organization will not help to move your application forward, it might bring it into question though. I am sure you have another reference point for your extracurricular activity or work experience that will be just as impressive.

Thanks for pointing that out. Its a trivial matter. I'll contact someone from the digital networking department and the website would be back up in 48 hours. Apart from that I've also provided social media handles for the non-profit.

If you can give me a stylistic and literary feedback on this essay, I'd be glad. Thank you soo much