Hello,
This is my essay for NYU
since im not a native english speaker.. there might be some grammar errors :)
second.. i am worried that my essay answers the both questions
I was really moved when i got some feedbacks from ppl last night for the first time
so... please leave some comments ony my essay!
Thanks!
NYU is "In and of the City" and "In and of the World." What does the concept of a global network university mean to you? How do you think studying in New York City, Abu Dhabi, or one of NYU's global sites would change you as a person and equip you to build cross-cultural relationships at NYU and beyond?
I was born in South Korea, not a particularly dominant or influential nation in the world. Unlike its petulant cousin to the north, South Korea has not garnered much attention from the world. It does not possess plentiful resources, finances or land mass. On a personal level I was once much like my country-insignificant and unnoticeable. I didn't play sports or embark on any adventures or challenges. I lived a boring life. If I were a flavor, I'd be vanilla.
At the age 15, things changed. A strong desire birthed within me to do something meaningful with my life. Dreams of attending university and plotting a career path dominated my thoughts. Looking around at my situation, I quickly realized that Korea was not the suitable place to achieve that dream. I was a frog in a well.
I began to search for what I felt would be the ideal setting to study and to fulfill my goals. My quest soon culminated with New York University. Here was an institution that had all the elements I was looking for as an international student preparing to make a global impact. New York is one of, if not the most, cosmopolitan cities in the world. It thrives with people of various nationalities and ethnicities. Even though the grand stage of New York is a far cry from my home city, NYU's multicultural student body and international focus is exactly the environment where I'd feel at home. In addition, because of its focus, and international campuses, NYU's academic programs offer relevant, and first-hand perspectives on world concerns. That kind of emphasis is a definite advantage for someone like me who wants to understand global economies.
The first step toward achieving my goal was to move to Canada where I honed my English skills and learned to adapt to North American culture. Now, after three years in Canada and as I enter my graduate year of high school, I am ready to embark on the next step toward fulfilling my dream-becoming a student at New York University.
In Korea, I felt like a frog trapped in a well. That's no longer the case. Today I am poised to jump into the ocean and discover new worlds. Author Stephen Covey wrote, "The greatest risk is the risk of riskless living." Choosing to stay in Korea would have been an example of that. I fully recognize that relocating to New York is huge step-like jumping into the ocean-but it is that kind of challenge that will make life meaningful for me. I am confident that when I plunge into that massive sea that is the world, New York University will teach me how to swim.
This is my essay for NYU
since im not a native english speaker.. there might be some grammar errors :)
second.. i am worried that my essay answers the both questions
I was really moved when i got some feedbacks from ppl last night for the first time
so... please leave some comments ony my essay!
Thanks!
NYU is "In and of the City" and "In and of the World." What does the concept of a global network university mean to you? How do you think studying in New York City, Abu Dhabi, or one of NYU's global sites would change you as a person and equip you to build cross-cultural relationships at NYU and beyond?
I was born in South Korea, not a particularly dominant or influential nation in the world. Unlike its petulant cousin to the north, South Korea has not garnered much attention from the world. It does not possess plentiful resources, finances or land mass. On a personal level I was once much like my country-insignificant and unnoticeable. I didn't play sports or embark on any adventures or challenges. I lived a boring life. If I were a flavor, I'd be vanilla.
At the age 15, things changed. A strong desire birthed within me to do something meaningful with my life. Dreams of attending university and plotting a career path dominated my thoughts. Looking around at my situation, I quickly realized that Korea was not the suitable place to achieve that dream. I was a frog in a well.
I began to search for what I felt would be the ideal setting to study and to fulfill my goals. My quest soon culminated with New York University. Here was an institution that had all the elements I was looking for as an international student preparing to make a global impact. New York is one of, if not the most, cosmopolitan cities in the world. It thrives with people of various nationalities and ethnicities. Even though the grand stage of New York is a far cry from my home city, NYU's multicultural student body and international focus is exactly the environment where I'd feel at home. In addition, because of its focus, and international campuses, NYU's academic programs offer relevant, and first-hand perspectives on world concerns. That kind of emphasis is a definite advantage for someone like me who wants to understand global economies.
The first step toward achieving my goal was to move to Canada where I honed my English skills and learned to adapt to North American culture. Now, after three years in Canada and as I enter my graduate year of high school, I am ready to embark on the next step toward fulfilling my dream-becoming a student at New York University.
In Korea, I felt like a frog trapped in a well. That's no longer the case. Today I am poised to jump into the ocean and discover new worlds. Author Stephen Covey wrote, "The greatest risk is the risk of riskless living." Choosing to stay in Korea would have been an example of that. I fully recognize that relocating to New York is huge step-like jumping into the ocean-but it is that kind of challenge that will make life meaningful for me. I am confident that when I plunge into that massive sea that is the world, New York University will teach me how to swim.