How's about good Life. Everyone wants a good lifestyle, I do too, I want to good a job near my

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Everyone wants a good lifestyle, I do too, I want to good a job near my house, I do not want to spend a long time on the buses, I also want to nice house where I can relax, I like Shopping and furniture when I need, I also lot of friends so I can stuff do with them, My idea of a good style is happing at work, going out the gyms, and spending weekend doing thing going places with friends. How's about your ideas.

Tran, your statement is not bery good. You have topic sentences without the proper verbs in them so that the sentence does not make sense. Remember, the verb describes the action in the sentence so when you say things like, "I like Shopping and furniture when I need", the sentence does not make any sense. There is no action to describe the topic. Your sentences are all similar in problem. There is no sense because there is no clear statement of action. Therefore, the statement is confusing to read and causes undue stress on the reader.

For example, what did you mean by "I like shopping and furniture when I need"? I am confused by what you are trying to say about "I also lots of friends so I can stuff do..." Did you mean" I also have a lot of friend with whom I can do stuff"? What do you mean by "happing at work" and "going out the gyms", even more confusing is what you are trying to say by "... doing thing going places...".

The statement just lacks so many connecting and descriptive words that if this were an actual test, I would give you a failing mark due to incoherence and lack of simple grammatical skills. By the way, learn when and where to place a period in your sentences in order to create an understandable sentence.

Thanks, @Holt,
I will try to write the sentences clear and easy to understand