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Regardless of whether or not you have an intended major or concentration, please elaborate on an academic area of interest and how you wish to explore it at NYU's campuses in New York or Abu Dhabi or at one of our global academic centers around the world. Please share any activities or experiences you have had that have cultivated your intellectual interests leading you to choose to study at the NYU campus of your choice.
There are a thousand good stories in my head, and the reason they've not printed on paper is the reason I'm applying to NYU. It's fear. A book is the culmination of an Author's private thoughts spilled out to the public; after all, it really kills a writer when the effort in his words doesn't please his intended audience. I'm hoping NYU can heal fear. I write so many versions of the same story I need some really, really smart Shakespearian Einstein to teach me what's good enough, when my writing becomes perfection. NYU has the best teachers, the best authors, and I want to learn from the best to surpass the best. If NYU can rate the poignancy of every word I know, I will know which words to use in my writing. After graduation, I want to know the confidence of famous men publishing art, and when I finally do, people will stop quoting Salinger and start quoting Dylan R. Tan.
Regardless of whether or not you have an intended major or concentration, please elaborate on an academic area of interest and how you wish to explore it at NYU's campuses in New York or Abu Dhabi or at one of our global academic centers around the world. Please share any activities or experiences you have had that have cultivated your intellectual interests leading you to choose to study at the NYU campus of your choice.
There are a thousand good stories in my head, and the reason they've not printed on paper is the reason I'm applying to NYU. It's fear. A book is the culmination of an Author's private thoughts spilled out to the public; after all, it really kills a writer when the effort in his words doesn't please his intended audience. I'm hoping NYU can heal fear. I write so many versions of the same story I need some really, really smart Shakespearian Einstein to teach me what's good enough, when my writing becomes perfection. NYU has the best teachers, the best authors, and I want to learn from the best to surpass the best. If NYU can rate the poignancy of every word I know, I will know which words to use in my writing. After graduation, I want to know the confidence of famous men publishing art, and when I finally do, people will stop quoting Salinger and start quoting Dylan R. Tan.
