Salt, governments, beliefs, and celebrity couples are a few examples of things that can be dissolved. You've just been granted the power to dissolve anything: physical, metaphorical, abstract, concrete... you name it. What do you dissolve, and what solvent do you use?
First I need some tools to carve a small passage way to let you in, but I must warn you it might take a while being that I spent years, building this wall. As you can see it is built with the finest it is truly a master piece in its self. In my opinion if I had to choose between myself and Vincent van Gogh it would be extremely difficult. While Van Gogh created emotion and life with his fingertips a brush and paint than when he was done with one painting he moved on to the next. I on the other hand built a wall and kept on building with natural ingredients, sweat, heartbreaks, scars, pain, memories, strength from "what doesn't kill you makes you stronger". While I prepare for your arrival, I suggest you also prepare yourself for an episode or should I say an adventure that will leave you to interpret and question yourself.
Now let the journey begin. Behind this wall as you can see all the componets that make "Hagar Boateng" These veins carry my talent to my heart and lungs. My heart is where all the passion lies and keeps my heart beating. Where my faith runs deep within my blood , where even in the dark where I can not see I still find the light. My rich blood that trace back to my ancestors and give me a reason to keep on going. My lungs which keep me alive, with every breath it takes in life lessons and lets out negativity. One of my favorite, my muscles without physical exercise my muscles still get stronger with every obstacle that does not kill me I become mighty . My spinal cord which sends sensations to my brain from my body. Where my brain commands it to stay strong and bare any load it is confronted with. My brain which is the power house, the reason for my functioning. My brain where my treasure is stored. My big brown eyes which reflect the future. With me I carry my solvent made with different elements forgiveness, strength, Love, brilliance and triumph. I will use my specially made solvent to dissolve this wall
Make the actual essay context a little clearer so the reader doesnt have to stop and think and will know as soon as read. Very good essay overall!
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...strength from the expression, "Wh at doesn't kill you makes you stronger."
While I prepare for your arrival, I suggest you also prepare yourself for an episode, or should I say an adventure, that will leave you to interpret and question yourself.---I added commas. But no, I do not think you should say adventure, because that does not really add anything to the sentence.
While I prepare for your arrival, I suggest you also prepare yourself for an episode or should I say an adventure, that will leave you to interpret and question yourself.
Now let the journey begin.---cool!!
My big, brown eyes which reflect the future.
You are great!!
